列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is understandable but contains grammatical errors and redundancy. Try to make your sentences clearer and more concise. For example, say "Yes, I definitely make a list when I go shopping because it helps me remember everything and prevents me from forgetting items at the grocery store."

範例: Yes, I definitely make a list when I go shopping because it helps me remember everything and prevents me from forgetting items at the grocery store.

建議: Your answer has good content but the sentence structure and grammar need improvement. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly. For example, "Of course, I make a list for my work because having a timetable is essential. It helps me manage my time properly and stay organized."

範例: Of course, I make a list for my work because having a timetable is essential. It helps me manage my time properly and stay organized.

建議: Your answer is brief and lacks detail. Try to expand your answer with reasons and use linking words. For example, "Some people don't like making lists because they think it wastes time and doesn't always work. Additionally, they may prefer to rely on memory."

範例: Some people don't like making lists because they think it wastes time and doesn't always work. Additionally, they may prefer to rely on memory.

建議: Your answer has good points but needs clearer sentence structure and grammar. Use linking words to connect ideas. For example, "I prefer making lists on my phone rather than on paper because I always carry my phone with me. Moreover, it helps me set reminders and remember previous tasks."

範例: I prefer making lists on my phone rather than on paper because I always carry my phone with me. Moreover, it helps me set reminders and remember previous tasks.

× Yes definitely I make a list when I when I'm doing when I'm do shopping becauses it help me to remember the all things and they keep from grocery store.

✓ Yes, definitely I make a list when I am shopping because it helps me to remember all the things and keep them from the grocery store.

The sentence has incorrect use of verb forms and auxiliary verbs. 'When I'm do shopping' is incorrect; it should be 'when I am shopping' using the present continuous tense. 'Becauses' is a spelling error and should be 'because'. 'It help me' should be 'it helps me' to agree with the singular subject 'it'. 'The all things' is incorrect; 'all the things' is the correct order. 'They keep from grocery store' is unclear; it should be 'keep them from the grocery store' to clarify the object and use the definite article 'the' before 'grocery store'. Suggestions: Use correct verb forms and auxiliary verbs, correct spelling, subject-verb agreement, proper article usage, and clear object references.

× Of course I make a list for my work because time timetable is must for before doing work and it helps me a lot to maintain my time and managed my time in proper way.

✓ Of course I make a list for my work because a timetable is a must before doing work and it helps me a lot to maintain and manage my time in a proper way.

The phrase 'time timetable is must for before doing work' is incorrect. 'Time timetable' is redundant; 'a timetable' suffices. 'Is must' should be 'is a must' to correctly use the noun phrase. 'Managed my time' should be 'manage my time' to maintain parallel verb forms with 'maintain'. Also, 'in proper way' needs the article 'a' to become 'in a proper way'. Suggestions: Use correct noun phrases with articles, maintain parallel verb forms, and include necessary articles for clarity.

× Because some people think it is a waste of time and it does not work. Always.

✓ Because some people think it is a waste of time and that it does not always work.

The sentence fragment 'Always.' is misplaced and should be integrated into the previous sentence for clarity. 'It does not work. Always.' is better expressed as 'it does not always work' to correctly place the adverb 'always'. Suggestions: Avoid sentence fragments and place adverbs correctly within sentences.

× I make a list on phone instead of using paper becauses phone is. I always carry my phone at everywhere and it is helpful me to set a reminder and remember the old things.

✓ I make a list on my phone instead of using paper because the phone is always with me. I always carry my phone everywhere and it helps me to set reminders and remember old things.

The phrase 'on phone' should be 'on my phone' to specify possession. 'Becauses phone is.' is incomplete and should be 'because the phone is always with me.' 'Carry my phone at everywhere' is incorrect; 'at' should be omitted to say 'carry my phone everywhere'. 'It is helpful me' is incorrect; it should be 'it helps me'. 'Set a reminder' can be pluralized to 'set reminders' for general use. 'Remember the old things' should be 'remember old things' without 'the' for general reference. Suggestions: Use possessive pronouns, complete sentences, correct prepositions, proper verb forms, and appropriate article usage.