列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清晰的问题，建议简化句子结构，确保语法正确，并且避免重复和不完整的句子。可以使用连接词使表达更连贯。

範例: Yes, I always make a list before shopping because it helps me shop efficiently. For example, I don't forget important items and can save time by following the list.

建議: 回答中有语法错误和句子不完整，建议使用完整句子表达观点，并用连接词连接句子，使表达更自然流畅。

範例: Yes, I make a list every morning before work. It works well because it helps me clear my mind and know which tasks are important.

建議: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不清晰。建议简化句子，使用正确的语法结构，并且具体说明原因，使用连接词使句子连贯。

範例: Some people don't like making lists because it can be inconvenient and time-consuming. Also, they may feel frustrated if they cannot complete all the tasks on the list.

建議: 回答较为清晰，但可以使用更多连接词使表达更自然，同时注意冠词和复数形式的正确使用。

範例: I prefer to make lists both on paper and on my phone. For example, I write lists on paper at work before starting, but when I go out, I use my phone so I can check the list anytime and anywhere.

× Yes, I always make a list before I go to a store and making this enables me and to shop efficiently at the insurer.

✓ Yes, I always make a list before I go to a store and making this enables me to shop efficiently at the store.

句中“making this enables me and to shop”结构不正确，应该是“making this enables me to shop”，即动词enable后接不定式to do。并且“insurer”应为“store”，可能是拼写错误。

× May not forget anything important and also list can keep me if.

✓ I may not forget anything important, and also the list can help me.

句子缺少主语，且结构混乱。应补充主语“I”，并调整句子结构使其通顺。

× also list can keep me if.

✓ also the list can help me.

名词前缺少定冠词“the”，应使用“the list”表示特指的清单。

× I think it works well, it helps me. To clear my mind and knowing what is import.

✓ I think it works well; it helps me to clear my mind and know what is important.

句子断裂，且“helps me. To clear”不连贯，应合并为“helps me to clear”，并且“knowing”应改为动词原形“know”，形容词“import”应为“important”。

× I think there are many reasons that people refuse to make a list and went over there might be making lists can be very.

✓ I think there are many reasons why people refuse to make a list, and one reason might be that making lists can be very

句子结构混乱，缺少连接词“why”和“that”，且“went over there”不合适，应改为“one reason might be that”。

× Une convenient and time consuming and also people get frustrated when they cannot complete the tasks in the lists.

✓ inconvenient and time-consuming, and also people get frustrated when they cannot complete the tasks in the lists.

“Une convenient”拼写错误，应为“inconvenient”；“time consuming”作为形容词应连写为“time-consuming”。

× I think I can do both paper and phone.

✓ I think I can use both paper and phone.

“do both paper and phone”表达不准确，应使用动词“use”来搭配“paper and phone”。

× But when I go out I make list on my phone so I can check it anywhere and anytime I want.

✓ But when I go out, I make lists on my phone so I can check them anywhere and anytime I want.

“make list”应为复数“make lists”，且代词“it”应改为复数“them”以对应复数名词。