列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer needs to be clearer and more natural. Try to avoid unclear phrases and redundancy. Use simple, correct sentences and explain why you make a list with specific reasons. For example, say that making a list helps you remember items and saves time while shopping.

範例: Yes, I always make a list before shopping because it helps me remember everything I need. This way, I don't forget important items and I can shop more quickly and efficiently.

建議: Your answer is understandable but contains some grammar mistakes and unclear phrases. Try to use correct sentence structures and linking words to make your answer more coherent. For example, explain how making a list helps you complete tasks easily.

範例: Yes, I usually make a list of tasks for my work, often using bullet points. This helps me stay organized and complete everything more easily and on time.

建議: Your answer is confusing and contains unclear words like 'orphan'. Try to use simple and correct vocabulary. Explain clearly why some people avoid lists, for example, because they trust their memory or prefer flexibility.

範例: Some people don't like making lists because they trust their memory and feel they can manage tasks without writing them down. They may also find lists restrictive and prefer to work more freely.

建議: Your answer has some unclear phrases and grammar errors. Try to express your preference clearly and give specific reasons. For example, say that using a phone is convenient because you can edit lists easily and carry them anywhere.

範例: I prefer to make lists on my phone because it is convenient and easy to carry. For example, when I travel, I can quickly add or remove items without any problem.

× Well, definitely yes they wanna have to go for a shopping.

✓ Well, definitely yes, they want to go shopping.

The phrase 'wanna have to' is incorrect. 'Wanna' is informal for 'want to', and 'have to' indicates obligation. Here, 'want to go shopping' is appropriate to express desire. Also, 'a shopping' is incorrect; 'shopping' is uncountable and does not need an article.

× I used to make a list of everything that I wanted to buy because it'll make my shopping easier and help me to survey states atrocity and also.

✓ I used to make a list of everything that I wanted to buy because it makes my shopping easier and helps me to avoid mistakes.

The phrase 'help me to survey states atrocity' is incorrect and unclear. Likely, the intended meaning is 'help me avoid mistakes' or 'help me stay organized'. Also, 'it'll' (it will) is inappropriate here; present tense 'it makes' fits better for habitual action.

× I will save how you have no listed by Julie for that in that thing that I have to buy.

✓ I will save what I have listed for the things that I have to buy.

The original sentence is unclear and contains incorrect pronouns and structure. 'How you have no listed by Julie' is incorrect. The correction clarifies the intended meaning using proper pronouns and structure.

× Definitely yes and when I have to do a work I used to make a list of everything and most of the time I make a bullet bullet points and may create a list of a worker and that I have to do because it makes me to do everything.

✓ Definitely yes, and when I have work to do, I make a list of everything. Most of the time, I make bullet points and create a list of the work that I have to do because it helps me to do everything.

'I used to make' suggests past habit, but the question is about current practice, so present tense 'I make' is better. 'May create' is incorrect modal usage here; 'create' is sufficient. 'Makes me to do' should be 'helps me to do' or 'helps me do'.

× Very easily.

✓ Very easily.

This fragment is incomplete as a sentence but can be accepted as an adverbial phrase modifying the previous sentence. No correction needed.

× Well, without any doubt, I will say most people don't like to make an orphan because they are very intelligent, they have a ability.

✓ Well, without any doubt, I would say most people don't like to make a list because they are very intelligent and have the ability.

'Make an orphan' is incorrect; likely intended 'make a list'. 'A ability' is incorrect; 'an ability' is correct, but better to say 'have the ability'. Also, 'will say' is better as 'would say' for politeness.

× I will say they are able to do anything without any a list over that work and they are very well organized and they have a good knowledge.

✓ I would say they are able to do anything without a list for that work, and they are very well organized and have good knowledge.

'Without any a list' is incorrect; 'without a list' is correct. 'Over that work' should be 'for that work'. 'They have a good knowledge' should be 'have good knowledge' as 'knowledge' is uncountable.

× So they remember that everything in their mind and go ahead.

✓ So they remember everything in their mind and go ahead.

'Remember that everything' is incorrect; 'remember everything' is correct. 'In their mind' is acceptable.

× Well, I proper to make a list on mobile phone because it is more convenient and easy to carry your own for example.

✓ Well, I prefer to make a list on my mobile phone because it is more convenient and easy to carry, for example.

'I proper to' is incorrect; should be 'I prefer to'. 'Your own' is unclear; 'my mobile phone' is appropriate. Added commas for clarity.

× When I'm traveling I really prefer to make my items in list normal.

✓ When I'm traveling, I really prefer to make a normal list of my items.

'Make my items in list normal' is incorrect word order and structure. Corrected to 'make a normal list of my items'.

× Well, for him as a man, I have to remove some items without worrying.

✓ Well, for me as a man, I have to remove some items without worrying.

'For him as a man' is incorrect; should be 'for me as a man' since the speaker is talking about himself.

× I will definitely remove it and without upvoting off.

✓ I will definitely remove it without worrying about it.

'Without upvoting off' is incorrect and unclear. Likely intended 'without worrying about it'.