列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is generally clear but contains some grammatical errors and redundancy. Try to avoid repeating words and ensure your sentences are grammatically correct. Also, provide a clear example to support your point and use linking words to improve coherence.

範例: Yes, I always make a list before I go shopping because it helps me stay organized and prevents me from forgetting important items. For instance, when I buy groceries, I list everything I need so I don't miss anything.

建議: Your answer addresses the question but has several grammatical mistakes and unclear phrases. Try to use correct sentence structures and clarify your points. Use linking words to connect ideas and be specific about how the list helps you prioritize tasks.

範例: Yes, I make a list for my work, and it definitely helps me. Since I have to complete many tasks each day, the list allows me to prioritize them effectively and manage my time better.

建議: Your answer is unclear and contains many grammatical errors. Try to express your ideas more clearly and avoid repetition. Provide specific reasons why some people dislike making lists and use linking words to connect your ideas logically.

範例: I think it depends on the person. Some people find making lists time-consuming and prefer to rely on their memory instead. For example, if someone has a good memory, they might not feel the need to write things down.

建議: Your answer is relevant but has some grammatical mistakes and awkward phrasing. Try to combine sentences for better flow and use linking words to connect ideas. Also, be more precise with your vocabulary.

範例: I prefer to make lists on my phone because it is very convenient. Since we always have our phones with us, it's easier to add or remove items, and I also receive notifications as reminders.

× I always make a list to before I go shopping.

✓ I always make a list before I go shopping.

The phrase 'to before' is incorrect because 'to' is unnecessary before 'before'. The verb 'make' is followed directly by the object 'a list' and then the adverbial phrase 'before I go shopping'. Removing 'to' corrects the sentence.

× I I do apply this weather an buying groceries or doing like shopping for myself for my personal items or anything such.

✓ I do apply this whether I am buying groceries or shopping for myself, for my personal items or anything like that.

The original sentence has multiple issues including repetition ('I I'), incorrect word usage ('weather' instead of 'whether'), missing auxiliary verbs, and awkward phrasing. Correcting these improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× Some of my other Criston make it but for me I definitely works because I have to complete about 100 different path throughout the day.

✓ Some of my other colleagues make it, but for me it definitely works because I have to complete about 100 different tasks throughout the day.

The subject 'it' requires the verb 'works' in third person singular, which is correct. However, 'Criston' is likely a mishearing or typo for 'colleagues', and 'path' should be plural 'tasks'. Correcting these improves subject-verb agreement and word choice.

× So by making the list it helps me to see what this the priority for me.

✓ So by making the list, it helps me to see what the priority is for me.

The phrase 'what this the priority' is incorrect. It should be 'what the priority is'. Also, a comma after 'list' improves readability.

× It's over you person to person.

✓ It varies from person to person.

The phrase 'It's over you person to person' is incorrect. The correct expression is 'It varies from person to person', which properly uses the quantifier 'from' to indicate variation among individuals.

× Because for some of them it could be like a time consuming task to make a list.

✓ Because for some of them, it could be a time-consuming task to make a list.

The sentence is mostly correct but missing a hyphen in 'time-consuming' which is a compound adjective. Adding the hyphen improves grammatical correctness.

× As compared to just remembering 1.

✓ As compared to just remembering one thing.

Using the numeral '1' in spoken or formal writing is inappropriate. It should be spelled out as 'one' and clarified as 'one thing' for clarity.

× So if somebody has a short memory memory they did not have to right now.

✓ So if somebody has a short memory, they do not have to write it down now.

The original sentence has tense inconsistency and missing words. 'Did not have to right now' is incorrect; it should be 'do not have to write it down now' to match present tense and correct verb usage.

× Because I think it's a very convenient way because the phones are always handy.

✓ Because I think it's a very convenient way since phones are always handy.

Using 'because' twice is redundant. Replacing the second 'because' with 'since' improves sentence flow and correctness.

× Everybody has their phones in their hand or inter pockets.

✓ Everybody has their phones in their hands or in their pockets.

The phrase 'inter pockets' is a mishearing or typo for 'in their pockets'. Also, 'hand' should be plural 'hands' to agree with 'everybody' and 'their'.

× So making a list and taking them off is way much easier as compared to writing down something on a paper and we can also get notification.

✓ So making a list and checking items off is much easier compared to writing something down on paper, and we can also get notifications.

The phrase 'taking them off' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'checking items off'. 'Way much easier' is informal; 'much easier' is better. 'On a paper' should be 'on paper'. Also, 'notification' should be plural 'notifications'.