列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical errors, which affects naturalness and clarity. Try to form a clear topic sentence directly answering the question, and avoid redundancy. Also, use linking words to connect ideas logically.

範例: Yes, I usually make a shopping list because it helps me remember what to buy and prevents me from overspending. I prefer writing it down on paper before I go to the store.

建議: Your answer has grammatical mistakes and lacks coherence. Use linking words to connect your ideas and be more specific about how the checklist helps you. Also, avoid redundancy and incomplete sentences.

範例: Yes, I make a checklist for my work because it helps me stay organized and focus on my daily tasks. Sometimes, I use a digital app or paper lists to remind me of what I need to do, which makes me feel more productive.

建議: Your answer addresses the question but contains repetition and grammatical errors. Try to use linking words to connect your points and be more concise. Also, avoid repeating words and ensure sentence completeness.

範例: Some people dislike making lists because they think it takes too much time. They believe they can remember their tasks without writing them down, so they prefer to start working immediately.

建議: Your answer repeats the question and has grammatical errors. Avoid repeating the question and use linking words to connect your reasons clearly. Also, correct sentence structures to improve naturalness.

範例: I prefer making lists on paper because I enjoy the feeling of writing things down. It is easier for me to remember tasks that way, and I like crossing items off when they are done.

× Yes, I'm at least when I sure hope it helps me remember what I need to buy and keeps me from spending too much money.

✓ Yes, I always make a list because I hope it helps me remember what I need to buy and keeps me from spending too much money.

The original sentence is incomplete and confusing due to missing words and incorrect structure. The phrase 'I'm at least when I sure hope' does not form a coherent sentence. The correction provides a clear and grammatically correct sentence that conveys the intended meaning.

× It helps me stay organize it and focus it on what I need to do in daily life.

✓ It helps me stay organized and focus on what I need to do in daily life.

The adjective 'organize' should be in its past participle form 'organized' to correctly describe the state of 'me'. Also, the pronoun 'it' is unnecessary and incorrect after 'stay organized' and 'focus'. Removing 'it' makes the sentence grammatically correct.

× Sometimes I use digital app or paper that reminds me about what my task is and I feel good I when I can.

✓ Sometimes I use a digital app or paper that reminds me about my tasks, and I feel good when I can.

The sentence lacks the article 'a' before 'digital app'. The phrase 'what my task is' is awkward; 'my tasks' is clearer. The phrase 'I feel good I when I can' is incorrect; removing the extra 'I' and adjusting the sentence improves clarity and grammar.

× Some people don't like making list because they think it takes time.

✓ Some people don't like making lists because they think it takes time.

The noun 'list' should be plural 'lists' because it refers to the general activity of making multiple lists, not just one list.

× So they prefer prefer to just start working on their task is.

✓ So they prefer to just start working on their tasks.

The word 'prefer' is repeated unnecessarily. Also, 'task is' is incorrect; it should be plural 'tasks' without 'is' to match the plural subject 'their'.

× Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone? I prefer making list on paper because I like that feeling on over writing things down.

✓ I prefer making lists on paper because I like the feeling of writing things down.

The original sentence repeats the question unnecessarily and has awkward phrasing 'that feeling on over writing things down'. The correction removes the repeated question and rephrases the sentence for clarity and grammatical correctness.

× Is easier for me to remember things that way and I enjoy crossing things off.

✓ It is easier for me to remember things that way, and I enjoy crossing things off.

The sentence is missing the subject 'It' at the beginning. Adding 'It' corrects the sentence structure and makes it grammatically correct.