列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 답변이 자연스럽지 않고 문법적으로 부정확합니다. 문장을 완성하고 명확한 이유를 제시하는 연습이 필요합니다. 또한, 불필요한 단어를 줄이고 간결하게 표현하는 것이 좋습니다.

範例: Yes, I always make a list when I go shopping because it helps me stay organized and saves time.

建議: 문장이 단편적이고 연결이 자연스럽지 않습니다. 주제문을 명확히 하고, 이유와 결과를 연결하는 접속사를 사용하여 문장을 완성하세요.

範例: Yes, I usually make a list before starting my work because it helps me clarify my goals and stay focused.

建議: 의미 전달이 명확하지 않고 문법 오류가 있습니다. 의견을 명확히 표현하고, 이유를 구체적으로 설명하는 연습이 필요합니다.

範例: In my opinion, some people dislike making lists because they find it time-consuming and complicated.

建議: 문장이 불완전하고 의미가 모호합니다. 이유를 명확히 하고, 문장을 완성하는 연습이 필요합니다.

範例: I prefer to make lists on my phone because it's convenient to access them anytime and anywhere when I go out.

× I like to make a list when I go shopping because. I want to efficient. Shopping for me?

✓ I like to make a list when I go shopping because I want to be efficient when shopping.

The original sentence is fragmented and lacks proper sentence structure. 'Because' should be followed by a complete clause explaining the reason. 'I want to efficient' is incorrect; it should be 'I want to be efficient' to include the verb 'be'. Also, 'Shopping for me?' is incomplete and unclear. The corrected sentence combines these ideas into a clear, grammatically correct sentence.

× I usually. Make a list before I start my work. And it. Help to make my purpose. Clearly.

✓ I usually make a list before I start my work, and it helps me to make my purpose clear.

The original sentences are fragmented and lack proper connection. 'I usually.' and 'Make a list' should be combined into one sentence. 'And it. Help to make my purpose. Clearly.' is fragmented and incorrect; 'help' should be 'helps' to agree with the singular subject 'it', and 'make my purpose clearly' should be 'make my purpose clear' (adjective form). The corrected sentence is a complete, coherent sentence with proper subject-verb agreement and word order.

× I want to efficient. Shopping for me?

✓ I want to be efficient when shopping.

The phrase 'Shopping for me?' is incorrect and unclear. The preposition 'for' is not appropriate here. Instead, 'when shopping' correctly indicates the time or context. Also, 'I want to efficient' is missing the verb 'be'. The correction clarifies the intended meaning with proper preposition and verb usage.

× I can see everywhere without when I go to.

✓ I can see it everywhere when I go out.

The phrase 'without when I go to' is incorrect and confusing. 'Without' is not appropriate here, and 'go to' is incomplete without an object. The corrected sentence uses 'when I go out' to indicate the time and 'see it everywhere' to clarify the meaning.

× I want to efficient. Shopping for me?

✓ I want to be efficient when shopping.

The original sentence lacks the verb 'be' and uses 'Shopping for me?' which is unclear and incorrect. The pronoun usage is not directly problematic here, but the sentence structure causes confusion. The correction clarifies the intended meaning with proper verb and phrase usage.

× And it. Help to make my purpose. Clearly.

✓ And it helps to make my purpose clear.

The subject 'it' is singular, so the verb should be 'helps' instead of 'help'. Also, 'make my purpose clearly' should be 'make my purpose clear' because 'clear' is an adjective describing 'purpose'. The correction fixes subject-verb agreement and adjective usage.

× In my own opinion, some people think making a list is of other work for them, so it is quite complex progress.

✓ In my opinion, some people think making a list is extra work for them, so it is quite a complex process.

The phrase 'is of other work' is incorrect; 'extra work' is more appropriate. 'Complex progress' is incorrect; 'complex process' is the correct phrase. Also, 'In my own opinion' is better as 'In my opinion'. The correction improves word choice and sentence clarity.