列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is relevant but contains grammatical errors and unclear phrases, such as 'An IT save is my budget'. Try to use clearer and more natural expressions. Also, avoid redundancy and keep your answer concise within 5 sentences. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

範例: Yes, I usually make a shopping list because it helps me remember what I need to buy. Moreover, it saves my budget and prevents me from wasting time in the store.

建議: Your answer addresses the question but has grammatical mistakes and unclear phrases like 'it's from'. Try to form complete sentences and use linking words to connect your ideas. Be more specific about how the list helps you at work.

範例: Yes, I make a checklist for my tasks because it helps me work more efficiently. For example, it reminds me of important duties and ensures I don't forget anything.

建議: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to express your ideas clearly and directly. Provide specific reasons why some people might dislike making lists, and use linking words to improve coherence.

範例: Some people dislike making lists because they think it takes too much time. Also, they prefer to rely on their memory instead of writing things down.

建議: Your answer is relevant but contains unclear phrases and repetition, such as 'Phyllis writing' and 'remind remind'. Try to use clear and natural expressions, avoid repetition, and organize your answer logically with linking words.

範例: I prefer to write my lists on paper because handwriting helps me remember tasks better. Therefore, writing things down on paper is the best method for me.

× It helps me stay remember what I need to buy.

✓ It helps me remember what I need to buy.

The phrase 'stay remember' is incorrect because 'stay' should not be followed by the base form of a verb. Instead, 'helps me remember' is the correct structure where 'help' is followed by the base verb 'remember'.

× An IT save is my budget and it's it doesn't lead to waste my time.

✓ It saves my budget and it doesn't waste my time.

The phrase 'An IT save is my budget' is unclear and contains pronoun misuse. 'It saves my budget' correctly uses 'it' to refer to the checklist and the verb 'saves' to indicate the action. Also, 'lead to waste my time' is incorrect; it should be 'doesn't waste my time'.

× Yes, I create a checklist for my task is because it helps me doing better and it's a reminder me what I need to do it's from.

✓ Yes, I create a checklist for my tasks because it helps me do better and reminds me what I need to do.

The original sentence has multiple structural errors: 'for my task is because' is incorrect; it should be 'for my tasks because'. 'Helps me doing better' should be 'helps me do better' because 'help' is followed by the base verb. 'It's a reminder me' is incorrect; it should be 'reminds me'. The phrase 'it's from' is unnecessary and unclear, so it is removed.

× It's so important to make a list and write something down on the paper.

✓ It's so important to make a list and write something down on paper.

The phrase 'on the paper' is less natural here; 'on paper' is the correct idiomatic expression. Also, no pronoun error here but the article 'the' is unnecessary, so this is more about article usage (ID 22). However, since only errors in the provided list are to be corrected, this is acceptable.

× They meeting it takes a lot of that time and they can do remember things for their self and I don't know.

✓ They think it takes a lot of time and they can remember things themselves, but I don't know.

'They meeting' is incorrect; likely intended 'They think'. 'A lot of that time' should be 'a lot of time'. 'They can do remember' is incorrect; 'can remember' is correct. 'For their self' should be 'themselves'. The sentence is restructured for clarity and grammatical correctness.

× I prefer to write things down on the paper because it's Phyllis writing so good and it helps me to remind remind everything what I need to do and the writing things on the paper.

✓ I prefer to write things down on paper because writing helps me remember everything I need to do.

'It's Phyllis writing so good' is unclear and incorrect; likely intended 'writing is so good' or 'I find writing helpful'. 'Helps me to remind remind' is incorrect; 'helps me remember' is correct. 'The writing things on the paper' is awkward and unnecessary. Also, 'on the paper' should be 'on paper' as an idiomatic expression.

× So for me it's so best way for do.

✓ So for me, it's the best way to do it.

'So best way' is incorrect; superlative adjectives require 'the' before them, so 'the best way' is correct. 'For do' is incorrect; the correct infinitive form is 'to do'. The sentence is restructured for clarity and grammatical correctness.