列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Câu trả lời của bạn hơi dài dòng và có một số lỗi ngữ pháp nhỏ. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp hơn, tránh lặp từ và sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh. Ngoài ra, hãy chú ý đến việc sử dụng thì và số nhiều cho động từ để câu tự nhiên hơn.

範例: No, I usually buy things spontaneously because I enjoy exploring new products. Also, I find making a shopping list time-consuming, so I prefer not to make one.

建議: Bạn trả lời khá tốt nhưng câu cuối cùng bị dở dang và thiếu liên kết. Hãy hoàn thiện câu và sử dụng các từ nối để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn. Đồng thời, tránh lặp từ và sử dụng cấu trúc câu đa dạng hơn.

範例: Yes, I always make a list before working because I have many tasks. For example, I prepare a weekly list at the start of each week, which helps me manage my time efficiently and prioritize my work.

建議: Câu trả lời có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và từ sai chính tả, làm giảm tính tự nhiên và rõ ràng. Bạn nên chú ý phát âm và chính tả, đồng thời sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và từ vựng phù hợp để diễn đạt ý rõ ràng hơn.

範例: Some people dislike making lists because they find it time-consuming and boring. Moreover, lists can feel restrictive, limiting their freedom and spontaneity, so they prefer to do things randomly instead of following a strict plan.

建議: Câu trả lời bị ngắt quãng và thiếu hoàn chỉnh, gây khó hiểu. Bạn cần luyện tập nói trôi chảy, tránh ngắt quãng và hoàn thiện ý tưởng. Ngoài ra, hãy sử dụng từ vựng chính xác và câu hoàn chỉnh để câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn.

範例: I prefer making lists on my phone because it is very convenient and flexible. I can easily edit my list whenever needed, and I can also review it anytime to stay organized.

× Absolutely no, because I'm the type of person that usually buy things randomly and I also think that making a list before shopping is really time consuming and.

✓ Absolutely no, because I'm the type of person that usually buys things randomly and I also think that making a list before shopping is really time consuming.

The subject 'person' is singular, so the verb should be 'buys' instead of 'buy' to agree in number. Also, the sentence ends abruptly with 'and.' Removing the extra 'and' improves clarity.

× I also think that making a list before shopping is really time consuming and.

✓ I also think that making a list before shopping is really time consuming.

The sentence ends with 'and' which is incomplete. Removing 'and' corrects the sentence structure.

× Of course yes, because I have a lot of work to do so I have to make a list before working.

✓ Of course, yes, because I have a lot of work to do, so I have to make a list before working.

Adding commas improves sentence clarity and separates ideas properly.

× This.

The word 'This.' is a sentence fragment and does not convey a complete thought. It should be removed or completed.

× I think that some people don't like making list because they mifi or time consuming and also boring.

✓ I think that some people don't like making lists because they are messy or time consuming and also boring.

The noun 'list' should be plural 'lists' to match 'some people'. Also, 'mifi' seems to be a typo; likely intended 'messy'. Adding 'are' before adjectives is necessary for correct grammar.

× Additionally making lose my restricts their freedom and also their activity.

✓ Additionally, making lists restricts their freedom and also their activities.

The original sentence is unclear and contains errors. 'Making lose my' is incorrect; it should be 'making lists'. 'Restricts' agrees with singular subject 'making lists' treated as singular. 'Activity' should be plural 'activities' to match context.

× Also some people prefer to do things randomly rather than following a switch plan.

✓ Also, some people prefer to do things randomly rather than following a strict plan.

The phrase 'switch plan' is incorrect; likely intended 'strict plan'. Adding a comma after 'Also' improves readability.

× I prefer to make a list on my phone because it's very convenient and flexibility.

✓ I prefer to make a list on my phone because it's very convenient and flexible.

The word 'flexibility' is a noun, but the sentence requires an adjective 'flexible' to describe 'it'.

× I can change anytime if there is some problem.

✓ I can change it anytime if there is some problem.

The object 'it' is missing after 'change' to clarify what can be changed.

× Oh, and I can. Like. A review on my list everyone if I.

✓ Oh, and I can review my list anytime if I want.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. Reconstructing it to a complete sentence improves clarity and meaning.