列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is generally clear but could be more natural and concise. Avoid redundancy and improve grammar, for example, say 'I make a list before shopping' instead of 'before going on shopping'. Also, use linking words like 'because' to connect ideas smoothly.

範例: Yes, I usually make a list before shopping because it helps me remember what I need and prevents me from spending money on unnecessary items.

建議: Try to organise your answer with clearer sentence structure and correct grammar. Use linking words like 'so' or 'therefore' to connect ideas. Also, avoid repetition and clarify your points more naturally.

範例: I'm not currently working as I'm studying, so I don't make lists for work. However, I do make lists for my studies because they help me stay organised and keep track of what I need to do.

建議: Your answer is relevant but could be more natural and precise. Avoid vague phrases like 'more than that' and use linking words such as 'because' and 'also' properly. Try to express ideas politely, for example, instead of 'lazy', say 'they prefer a more spontaneous approach'.

範例: In my opinion, some people don't like making lists because they think it takes too much time and prefer to be more spontaneous. Also, they might find it unnecessary to organise every detail.

建議: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to speak more clearly and organise your ideas logically. Use linking words like 'but' and 'because' correctly. Also, avoid incomplete sentences and unclear phrases.

範例: I used to prefer writing lists on paper, but nowadays I find it easier to use my phone because it's more convenient and I don't have to worry about losing the paper.

× Yes, I do make a list before going on shopping.

✓ Yes, I do make a list before going shopping.

The phrase 'going on shopping' is incorrect. The correct form is 'going shopping' without the preposition 'on'. This is because 'go' is followed directly by the gerund form of the verb to indicate the activity.

× Usually I take a note or sometimes I just write down on a paper.

✓ Usually I take a note or sometimes I just write it down on paper.

The phrase 'write down on a paper' is awkward and incorrect. The correct expression is 'write it down on paper'. Also, 'a paper' is incorrect here because 'paper' is an uncountable noun when referring to material; no article is needed.

× It also helps me to not wasting money on other stuff that I don't.

✓ It also helps me to not waste money on other stuff that I don't.

After 'helps me to', the base form of the verb should be used, not the gerund. Therefore, 'wasting' should be corrected to 'waste'.

× Currently I'm not working anywhere I'm just studying that's why I don't make any list for my work but I do make it list for my study.

✓ Currently, I'm not working anywhere; I'm just studying. That's why I don't make any list for my work, but I do make a list for my study.

The original sentence is a run-on sentence lacking proper punctuation and conjunctions. Adding commas, semicolons, and conjunctions improves clarity and sentence structure.

× It helps me to get organized an know the things what are I have to do in my coming future and to make my study better I take lit make list.

✓ It helps me to get organized and know the things I have to do in my near future. To improve my study, I make a list.

The phrase 'an know' should be 'and know'. 'What are I have to do' is incorrect; it should be 'I have to do'. 'Coming future' is redundant; 'near future' is better. 'I take lit make list' is unclear and corrected to 'I make a list' for clarity.

× In my opinion, some people don't like to make a list because maybe they think it's more time consuming.

✓ In my opinion, some people don't like to make a list because maybe they think it's more time-consuming.

The phrase 'time consuming' should be hyphenated as 'time-consuming' when used as a compound adjective before a noun or in this context.

× They might feel like they're wasting their time and more than that.

✓ They might feel like they're wasting their time and more than that.

This sentence is incomplete or unclear. It would be better to say: 'They might feel like they're wasting their time or even more than that.' However, since the instruction is to only correct mistakes listed, and 'Incorrect conjunction use' is relevant, the correction is to clarify conjunction usage.

× Also the reason might be they are lazy, they don't want to get organized.

✓ Also, the reason might be that they are lazy; they don't want to get organized.

Adding 'that' after 'might be' improves sentence clarity. Also, separating the two clauses with a semicolon or period improves readability.

× Talking about making a list, I used to prefer writing on a note or a paper before, but nowadays because with the advancement of the technology, it's more easier to.

✓ Talking about making a list, I used to prefer writing on a note or paper before, but nowadays, with the advancement of technology, it's easier to do so.

The phrase 'writing on a note or a paper' should be 'writing on a note or paper' because 'paper' is uncountable here. 'More easier' is incorrect; 'easier' is sufficient. Also, 'because with the advancement' is awkward; 'nowadays, with the advancement' is better.

× Take notes on our phone 'cause because you don't have to find out the paintings and the person I usually forget where.

✓ I take notes on my phone because I don't have to look for a pen and paper, which I usually forget where I put.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. 'Take notes on our phone 'cause because you don't have to find out the paintings and the person I usually forget where' is incoherent. The correction clarifies the intended meaning and corrects sentence structure.