列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Try to make your answer more fluent and organised. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid filler words like 'uh' and repetition. For example, you could say: "Yes, I always make a shopping list before I go. This helps me remember everything I need and makes shopping quicker and more efficient."

範例: Yes, I always make a shopping list before I go. This helps me remember everything I need and makes shopping quicker and more efficient.

建議: Your answer is unclear and lacks structure. Try to respond directly with a clear topic sentence, then explain your reason with specific details. Use linking words to connect ideas. For example: "No, I don't usually make lists at work because I find it easier to remember my tasks mentally. However, sometimes I do write things down if I have many tasks to manage."

範例: No, I don't usually make lists at work because I find it easier to remember my tasks mentally. However, sometimes I do write things down if I have many tasks to manage.

建議: Your answer is confusing and hard to follow. Try to express your ideas clearly with correct vocabulary and grammar. Start with a clear topic sentence, then explain with specific reasons using linking words. For example: "Some people dislike making lists because they find them stressful. Seeing a long list can make them worry about finishing all tasks, which can be overwhelming."

範例: Some people dislike making lists because they find them stressful. Seeing a long list can make them worry about finishing all tasks, which can be overwhelming.

建議: Your answer has good ideas but needs clearer organisation and grammar. Start with a clear preference, then explain reasons with linking words. For example: "I prefer to make lists on my phone because it is always with me. This makes it easier and more flexible than using paper lists."

範例: I prefer to make lists on my phone because it is always with me. This makes it easier and more flexible than using paper lists.

× I make a list when before I go shopping, I write down everything on the paper.

✓ I make a list before I go shopping; I write down everything on paper.

The original sentence has redundant and misplaced words ('when before') causing confusion. The corrected sentence removes redundancy and uses a semicolon to connect related independent clauses properly.

× When I get there is easier to know.

✓ When I get there, it is easier to know.

The original sentence lacks a subject ('it') after 'there' and a comma to separate the dependent clause, making it unclear. Adding 'it' and a comma clarifies the sentence structure.

× And I can remember everything, what I need, what I need to buy and what the what in.

✓ And I can remember everything: what I need, what I need to buy, and what is in the list.

The original sentence is incomplete and confusing ('what the what in'). Using a colon introduces the list properly, and completing the phrase clarifies the meaning.

× I'm not forgetting anything what I need.

✓ I'm not forgetting anything I need.

The phrase 'anything what I need' is incorrect; 'what' is unnecessary here. Removing 'what' corrects the sentence structure.

× No. I don't make alloys to at my job because at work.

✓ No. I don't make lists at my job because at work.

The word 'alloys' is incorrect in this context; the intended word is 'lists'. Correcting the word fixes the quantifier issue.

× Because I feel easier to metrics.

✓ Because I find it easier to manage tasks.

The original sentence is unclear and uses 'metrics' incorrectly. Rephrasing to 'find it easier to manage tasks' conveys the intended meaning clearly.

× And things about what I need to do and what maybe sometime.

✓ And think about what I need to do and what I might do sometime.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. Adding 'think' and restructuring the sentence improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× When I go starting then.

✓ When I start, then.

The phrase 'go starting' is incorrect. Using 'start' as the verb corrects the sentence.

× Because people things they give the mistress and when they seeing big losses and they worry about to make finish their job.

✓ Because people think they get stressed when they see big lists, and they worry about finishing their job.

The original sentence contains multiple errors: 'things' should be 'think', 'give the mistress' is incorrect and should be 'get stressed', 'seeing big losses' should be 'see big lists', and 'worry about to make finish' is incorrect. The correction addresses these issues for clarity and grammar.

× And then make the mistress and make them too busy.

✓ And then the list makes them too busy.

The phrase 'make the mistress' is incorrect; it should be 'the list makes'. The correction clarifies the subject and verb agreement.

× Maybe sometime we cannot make clear what he needs to do.

✓ Maybe sometimes we cannot be clear about what we need to do.

The original sentence has incorrect pronouns and awkward phrasing. Changing 'he' to 'we' and rephrasing improves clarity and correctness.

× Usually I make lies when I make voice I make on my phone because.

✓ Usually I make lists or voice notes on my phone because...

The word 'lies' is a misspelling of 'lists'. Also, 'make voice' is unclear; 'voice notes' is more appropriate. Correcting these improves meaning and grammar.

× My phone is always with me and I can find everywhere and flexibility easier and no need to look for the paper where I can find it tells me to do on my phone.

✓ My phone is always with me, so I can access my list anywhere easily without needing to look for paper; it tells me what to do on my phone.

The original sentence is a run-on with unclear phrasing. Breaking it into clearer parts and correcting word choice improves readability and grammar.