列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is clear but contains some grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. Try to use simpler, correct sentences and avoid redundancy. For example, instead of "I don't wanna get confused about this talk," say "to avoid confusion about what to buy." Also, use linking words like "because" to connect ideas smoothly.

範例: Yes, I always make a list before shopping because it helps me avoid confusion about what to buy. I usually write down the clothes I want, including the colors and sizes, so I don't forget anything.

建議: Your answer is relevant but has some grammar mistakes and repetitive phrases. Use linking words like "because" and "therefore" to improve coherence. Also, try to be more concise and avoid repeating the same idea.

範例: Yes, I make a list for my work because I tend to forget things quickly. Therefore, the list helps me keep track of my duties and responsibilities effectively.

建議: Your answer has several grammar errors and unclear expressions. Try to organize your ideas clearly using linking words like "because" and "or." Also, avoid repeating words and focus on giving specific reasons.

範例: Some people don't like making lists because they are very confident in their memory. They believe they can remember everything without writing it down, so they prefer to rely on their minds.

建議: Your answer is understandable but has grammar mistakes and some unclear phrases. Use linking words like "because" to explain your preference. Also, try to avoid repetition and improve sentence structure.

範例: I prefer to make lists on my phone because I use the notes app every day. Whenever I forget something, I can quickly check my list. I avoid paper lists because I might lose them easily.

× Absolutely, I'd make a list of all the shop 'cause I don't wanna get confused about this talk, what I want to buy it and what I'm gonna take it.

✓ Absolutely, I make a list of all the shops because I don't want to get confused about what I want to buy and what I'm going to take.

The sentence incorrectly uses 'I'd make' which implies conditional or future in the past, but the context requires simple present tense to express habitual action. Also, 'all the shop' should be plural 'all the shops'. The phrase 'what I want to buy it and what I'm gonna take it' has unnecessary pronouns 'it'. Correcting these improves clarity and grammatical accuracy.

× Absolutely, I'd make a list of all the shop 'cause I don't wanna get confused about this talk, what I want to buy it and what I'm gonna take it.

✓ Absolutely, I make a list of all the shops because I don't want to get confused about what I want to buy and what I'm going to take.

The noun 'shop' should be plural 'shops' to match 'all the', which refers to multiple items. Using singular here is incorrect.

× So I already make a list of the outfits, including which color I want an the size I want.

✓ So I already make a list of the outfits, including which color I want and the size I want.

The sentence uses 'an' instead of 'and', which is a spelling error affecting meaning. The verb 'make' is correctly in present tense to indicate habitual action.

× So yeah, I definitely make a list before I shop.

✓ So yeah, I definitely make a list before I shop.

This sentence is correct in present tense to express habitual action; no correction needed.

× Yes, I do make a list for my job 'cause I'm somebody who forget things very fast.

✓ Yes, I do make a list for my job because I'm somebody who forgets things very fast.

The verb 'forget' should be in third person singular form 'forgets' to agree with the singular subject 'I am somebody who'.

× So to remember it, I make a list of my work so I could follow my duties and my responsibilities.

✓ So to remember it, I make a list of my work so I can follow my duties and my responsibilities.

The modal verb 'could' is incorrect here; 'can' is appropriate to express ability in present tense.

× So for that reason, list is very important when it comes to me.

✓ So for that reason, the list is very important when it comes to me.

The noun 'list' is singular and needs the definite article 'the' to specify the particular list being referred to.

× Some people doesn't prefer making list 'cause maybe they are extremely confident about themselves and that's the reason why they want to they don't want to make a list and they have very sharp minds.

✓ Some people don't prefer making lists because maybe they are extremely confident about themselves and that's the reason why they don't want to make a list and they have very sharp minds.

The verb 'doesn't' should be 'don't' to agree with the plural subject 'some people'. Also, 'making list' should be 'making lists' to be plural and consistent.

× Some people doesn't prefer making list 'cause maybe they are extremely confident about themselves and that's the reason why they want to they don't want to make a list and they have very sharp minds.

✓ Some people don't prefer making lists because maybe they are extremely confident about themselves and that's the reason why they don't want to make a list and they have very sharp minds.

The noun 'list' should be plural 'lists' after 'making' to indicate the general activity of making lists.

× Some people doesn't prefer making list 'cause maybe they are extremely confident about themselves and that's the reason why they want to they don't want to make a list and they have very sharp minds.

✓ Some people don't prefer making lists because maybe they are extremely confident about themselves and that's the reason why they don't want to make a list and they have very sharp minds.

The phrase 'they want to they don't want to' is incorrect and redundant. It should be simplified to 'they don't want to' to convey the intended meaning clearly.

× So that's why they are they are very rely on their brain so.

✓ So that's why they rely very much on their brain.

The phrase 'they are they are very rely' is incorrect. 'Rely' is a verb and should not be preceded by 'are'. Also, 'very rely' is incorrect; it should be 'rely very much' or 'rely heavily'. The sentence is corrected for proper verb usage and pronoun clarity.

× I prefer to make list on my phone.

✓ I prefer to make a list on my phone.

The noun 'list' is countable and requires the indefinite article 'a' when singular.

× I I usually every day I make a list on the notes.

✓ I usually make a list every day on the notes app.

The phrase 'I I usually every day I make a list on the notes' is awkward and redundant. Correcting the word order and adding 'app' clarifies the meaning.

× So whenever I feel like I forgot anything I immediately check in my notes and check the list.

✓ So whenever I feel like I forgot anything, I immediately check my notes and check the list.

The preposition 'in' is unnecessary after 'check' when referring to notes; 'check my notes' is correct.

× And when it comes to paper I'm pretty care this so I might lost lost it here.

✓ And when it comes to paper, I'm pretty careless, so I might lose it here.

The phrase 'I'm pretty care this' is incorrect; it should be 'I'm pretty careless'. Also, 'might lost lost it' is incorrect; 'might lose it' is correct to express possibility in present/future.