列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is understandable but has some grammatical errors and redundancy. Try to make your sentences clearer and more concise. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly and avoid repeating the same point.

範例: Yes, I always make a list before shopping because it helps me remember everything I need. This way, I don't have to make extra trips to the store.

建議: Your answer lacks clarity and has grammatical mistakes. Try to explain your reason more clearly and complete your sentences. Use linking words to connect your ideas logically.

範例: Yes, I always make lists for my work because I have a memory problem that makes me forget things easily. Therefore, writing notes helps me remember important tasks, and it works very well.

建議: Your answer is unclear and contains some incorrect words. Try to express your ideas more clearly and avoid using incorrect vocabulary. Also, use linking words to make your answer coherent.

範例: Some people don't like making lists because they have good memories and don't feel it's necessary. It depends on the person's habits and preferences.

建議: Your answer is understandable but has some repetition and grammatical errors. Try to make your sentences more concise and clear. Use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

範例: Personally, I prefer making lists on my phone because I always carry it with me. This makes it easier and more convenient to check and update my lists anytime.

× Yes, I always do to make a list before going shopping because I'm I make sure that I will not forget anything to bring home and.

✓ Yes, I always make a list before going shopping because I make sure that I will not forget anything to bring home.

The phrase 'I always do to make a list' is incorrect; 'do' is unnecessary here. Also, 'I'm I make sure' is a grammatical error likely due to repetition. The correct form is 'I always make a list' and 'I make sure'. This correction improves sentence clarity and grammatical correctness.

× I will not have to go again for that thing, that's why I will.

✓ I will not have to go again for that thing; that's why I always do.

The original sentence is incomplete and unclear. 'That's why I will' is an incomplete clause. The corrected sentence completes the thought by adding 'always do' to indicate the habitual action, improving sentence structure and clarity.

× Yes, I always make list for my work because I have a certain disorder with the make me forgotten everything.

✓ Yes, I always make lists for my work because I have a certain disorder that makes me forget everything.

'Make list' should be 'make lists' to agree in number. Also, 'with the make me forgotten everything' is incorrect; it should be 'that makes me forget everything' to correctly express cause and effect and use proper verb forms.

× That's why I always make some note or least to remember everything.

✓ That's why I always make some notes or lists to remember everything.

'Some note or least' is incorrect; it should be 'some notes or lists' to correctly use plural forms and quantifiers. This correction ensures proper agreement and clarity.

× Yeah, it works really good, pretty good because it helps me to not.

✓ Yeah, it works really well, pretty well because it helps me not to forget.

'Good' is an adjective and should be replaced with the adverb 'well' to modify the verb 'works'. Also, 'helps me to not' is awkward; 'helps me not to forget' is clearer and grammatically correct.

× Because not everyone have the like sort memory disorder.

✓ Because not everyone has that kind of memory disorder.

'Everyone' is singular and requires the singular verb 'has' instead of 'have'. Also, 'the like sort' is incorrect; 'that kind of' is the proper phrase to describe a type or category.

× And there are so many kinds of people like who can always remember everything and who always forget everything.

✓ There are many kinds of people: some can always remember everything, and some always forget everything.

The original sentence is awkward and unclear. Adding a colon and restructuring the sentence improves clarity and flow, making the comparison between types of people clearer.

× That's why it's depend on abortion.

✓ That's why it depends on the person.

'It's depend' is incorrect; the verb should be 'depends' to agree with the singular subject 'it'. Also, 'abortion' is a wrong word here, likely a mishearing or typo; 'person' fits the context better.

× From my personal opinion, I prefer to make a list on my phone because I always bring phone everywhere.

✓ In my personal opinion, I prefer to make a list on my phone because I always bring my phone everywhere.

'From my personal opinion' should be 'In my personal opinion'. Also, 'bring phone' lacks the possessive pronoun 'my'. These corrections improve prepositional and pronoun usage.

× That's why because it will it will be more easy and convenient and it helps to like read, read that list easily and completed the paper it.

✓ That's why it will be easier and more convenient, and it helps me to read the list easily and complete the paper list.

'More easy' is incorrect; the comparative form is 'easier'. The sentence also has redundancy and unclear phrases like 'helps to like read, read that list' which is corrected to 'helps me to read the list easily'. The phrase 'completed the paper it' is unclear and corrected to 'complete the paper list' for clarity.