列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Try to make your answer more fluent and coherent by avoiding incomplete sentences and using linking words to connect your ideas smoothly. Also, correct grammar mistakes such as 'it's assist me' to 'it helps me'.

範例: Yes, I usually make a shopping list because it helps me stay organized. For example, I arrange the ingredients in the order of the store sections, so I don't waste time moving back and forth.

建議: Focus on completing your sentences and using proper grammar. Use linking words to connect your ideas and provide specific examples to clarify your points.

範例: Yes, I like to make a list when I start work because it keeps me organized. For instance, it helps me manage my emails so I don't miss important messages, and it allows me to track my progress throughout the day.

建議: Improve clarity by structuring your answer with a clear topic sentence and supporting details. Avoid incomplete sentences and use linking words to explain reasons logically.

範例: From my perspective, many people dislike making lists because they find it stressful to plan everything. Instead, they prefer to be flexible and complete tasks spontaneously without strict schedules.

建議: Try to avoid repetition and improve sentence structure for clarity. Use linking words to connect your ideas and provide specific examples.

範例: I prefer making lists on my phone because it is more flexible and faster. For example, some apps send notifications to remind me of important tasks, helping me stay organized.

× Yes, most of the time I make a shopping list so it's assist me to be organized.

✓ Yes, most of the time I make a shopping list so it assists me to be organized.

The verb 'assist' should be in the third person singular form 'assists' to agree with the singular subject 'it'. This is a subject-verb agreement issue involving verb conjugation.

× And also I can. Like put my ingredients in particular order so I don't waste anytime by transporting. From section to section. And.

✓ Also, I can put my ingredients in a particular order so I don't waste any time moving from section to section.

The original sentence is fragmented and lacks proper structure. Combining the fragments into a complete sentence improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× Like put my ingredients in particular order so I don't waste anytime by transporting.

✓ Like put my ingredients in a particular order so I don't waste any time by transporting.

The phrase 'particular order' requires the indefinite article 'a' before 'particular order'. Also, 'anytime' should be two words 'any time' in this context.

× I don't waste anytime by transporting. From section to section.

✓ I don't waste any time moving from section to section.

The preposition 'by' is incorrectly used here. The verb 'moving' better expresses the action without 'by'. Also, 'anytime' should be 'any time'.

× Yes, I really love to make a list when I go to the work or. Start working it's because of its keep me organized and it's keep me on top of my e-mail so I don't miss anything.

✓ Yes, I really love to make a list when I go to work or start working because it keeps me organized and keeps me on top of my e-mails so I don't miss anything.

The phrase 'go to the work' should be 'go to work' without 'the'. The verb 'keep' should be 'keeps' to agree with singular subject 'it'. Also, 'e-mail' is better pluralized as 'e-mails' here.

× it's because of its keep me organized and it's keep me on top of my e-mail

✓ because it keeps me organized and keeps me on top of my e-mails

The pronoun 'its' is incorrectly used; it should be 'it' as the subject. Also, 'keep' should be 'keeps' to agree with singular subject 'it'.

× Also I can like you know how much I get processing and get better at the work and.

✓ Also, I can track how much I process and get better at work.

The original sentence is unclear and fragmented. Rephrasing improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× Yes, I really love to make a list when I go to the work or. Start working it's because of its keep me organized

✓ Yes, I really love to make a list when I go to work or start working because it keeps me organized

The phrase 'go to the work' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'go to work' without 'the'.

× From my perspective, the majority of people, I don't like to put a list, let's be 'cause they don't like to be like stressful or put their approach or.

✓ From my perspective, the majority of people don't like to make a list because they don't like to feel stressed or restrict their approach.

The sentence has pronoun misuse and unclear phrasing. 'I don't like' is incorrect here as it refers to 'the majority of people'. Also, 'let's be' is inappropriate. Rephrasing clarifies meaning.

× And they will try to complete it at the time, so they prefer to be flexible and do it without.

✓ They try to complete it on time, so they prefer to be flexible and do it without a list.

The original sentence is incomplete and unclear. Adding missing parts and correcting prepositions improves clarity.

× I prefer to make a list on my phone instead of paper.

✓ I prefer to make a list on my phone instead of on paper.

The preposition 'on' is needed before 'paper' to parallel the phrase 'on my phone'.

× For example there is some apps on phone.

✓ For example, there are some apps on the phone.

'Apps' is plural, so the verb should be 'are' not 'is'. Also, 'on phone' should be 'on the phone'.

× It's it allows you to send you a notifications so you can keep on top of your important important processing.

✓ They allow you to send notifications so you can keep on top of your important tasks.

'It allows' is incorrect because 'apps' is plural; it should be 'they allow'. Also, 'a notifications' is incorrect; 'notifications' is plural and does not need 'a'. Repetition of 'important' is removed for clarity.