列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 你的回答不够清晰，语法和表达存在较多错误，且内容不连贯。建议回答时直接回应问题，使用简单明了的句子，并避免无关或模糊的表达。

範例: No, I don't usually make a list when I go shopping because I prefer to buy things spontaneously and I find it more enjoyable.

建議: 回答中存在发音和拼写错误，句子结构混乱。建议使用正确的词汇和语法，清楚表达观点，并用连接词使句子更连贯。

範例: Yes, I make lists for my work and they are very useful because I tend to be forgetful. Making lists helps me remember all the tasks I need to complete.

建議: 回答不够具体且语法错误较多。建议明确表达原因，使用正确的语法和词汇，并尝试给出具体的理由。

範例: Some people don't like making lists because they have good memories and can remember tasks easily. Others may feel that making lists adds extra pressure or stress.

建議: 回答中有严重的语法和表达错误，内容不连贯。建议简洁明了地表达偏好，使用正确的词汇和句子结构。

範例: I prefer to make lists on my phone because it is convenient and I always have my phone with me, unlike paper which I might lose.

× No, I don't make list when I shop be 'cause I'm kind of present who is very casual and before I go to a shop, Mccleester makes me feel a little terribile. A little.

✓ No, I don't make lists when I shop because I'm the kind of person who is very casual and before I go to a shop, making a list makes me feel a little terrible. A little.

这里的“list”应该用复数形式“lists”，因为表示泛指购物时制作的清单。英语中可数名词在泛指时通常用复数形式。

× No, I don't make list when I shop be 'cause I'm kind of present who is very casual and before I go to a shop, Mccleester makes me feel a little terribile. A little.

✓ No, I don't make lists when I shop because I'm the kind of person who is very casual and before I go to a shop, making a list makes me feel a little terrible. A little.

句中“present”应为“person”，这是代词使用错误，导致句意不明。应使用正确的名词“person”来指代人。

× No, I don't make list when I shop be 'cause I'm kind of present who is very casual and before I go to a shop, Mccleester makes me feel a little terribile. A little.

✓ No, I don't make lists when I shop because I'm the kind of person who is very casual and before I go to a shop, making a list makes me feel a little terrible. A little.

句中“Mccleester”应为“making a list”，动词短语应使用动名词形式作为主语，表示“制作清单”这件事。

× Yes elf make Alaska for my work and I think it is very useful because I'm the kind of person who is very casual and all my friends say have a bad memories so make it last can help me remember what we need to do.

✓ Yes, I make a list for my work and I think it is very useful because I'm the kind of person who is very casual and all my friends say they have bad memories so making a list can help me remember what we need to do.

“make Alaska”应为“make a list”，且“memories”前应加“bad”修饰，且“have a bad memories”中“memories”是复数，前面不应加不定冠词“a”。

× Yes elf make Alaska for my work and I think it is very useful because I'm the kind of person who is very casual and all my friends say have a bad memories so make it last can help me remember what we need to do.

✓ Yes, I make a list for my work and I think it is very useful because I'm the kind of person who is very casual and all my friends say they have bad memories so making a list can help me remember what we need to do.

“elf”应为“I”，“all my friends say have a bad memories”缺少主语，应补充“they”作为主语。

× Yes elf make Alaska for my work and I think it is very useful because I'm the kind of person who is very casual and all my friends say have a bad memories so make it last can help me remember what we need to do.

✓ Yes, I make a list for my work and I think it is very useful because I'm the kind of person who is very casual and all my friends say they have bad memories so making a list can help me remember what we need to do.

“make it last”应为“making a list”，动词短语应使用动名词形式作为主语，表示“制作清单”这件事。

× Uh, I don't know, maybe this persons have a good memories, they can remember everything they need to do our they maybe think may classes. Makes them feel under stress.

✓ Uh, I don't know, maybe these people have good memories, they can remember everything they need to do or maybe they think making lists makes them feel under stress.

“this persons”应为“these people”，指复数人；“a good memories”应为“good memories”，复数名词前不加不定冠词。

× Uh, I don't know, maybe this persons have a good memories, they can remember everything they need to do our they maybe think may classes. Makes them feel under stress.

✓ Uh, I don't know, maybe these people have good memories, they can remember everything they need to do or maybe they think making lists makes them feel under stress.

“our”应为“or”，“may classes”应为“making lists”，代词和词语使用错误导致句意不清。

× Uh, I don't know, maybe this persons have a good memories, they can remember everything they need to do our they maybe think may classes. Makes them feel under stress.

✓ Uh, I don't know, maybe these people have good memories, they can remember everything they need to do or maybe they think making lists makes them feel under stress.

“may classes”应为“making lists”，动词短语应使用动名词形式。

× I'll be tied to a prefer make a left on my phone because. Alan cannot present who can't live without my phone and make a lesser on my phone is very convenient for me with small account molefe I can't find a paper.

✓ I'd prefer to make a list on my phone because I am a person who can't live without my phone and making a list on my phone is very convenient for me when I can't find paper.

“I'll be tied to a prefer”应为“I'd prefer to”，情态动词和表达方式错误；“Alan cannot present”应为“I am a person”，代词错误；“make a lesser”应为“making a list”，动词形式错误；“with small account molefe”应为“when I can't find paper”，表达不清。