列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Try to make your answer more natural and grammatically correct by using complete sentences and correct verb forms. Also, avoid redundancy and clarify your points with linking words. For example, instead of 'I do a checklist for anything like supermarket,' say 'I usually make a checklist when I go to the supermarket to ensure I don't forget anything.'

範例: Yes, I usually make a checklist when I go shopping, especially at the supermarket. This helps me remember everything I need. Moreover, I organize the items by sections to save time while shopping.

建議: Focus on structuring your answer clearly with complete sentences and linking words. Avoid incomplete sentences and unclear phrases. For example, explain how making lists helps you manage emails and daily tasks effectively.

範例: Yes, I like to make lists for my work. I keep track of my emails and daily tasks to ensure I don't miss anything. This method helps me stay organized and complete my work efficiently.

建議: Improve clarity by using complete sentences and clearer explanations. Use linking words to connect ideas logically. For example, explain that some people prefer flexibility and feel pressured by lists.

範例: Some people don't like making lists because they prefer to work freely without restrictions. They may feel that lists create pressure or limit their flexibility in completing tasks.

建議: Make your answer more natural by correcting grammar and using linking words. Avoid filler words like 'like' and clarify your points. For example, explain why phone lists are more convenient and efficient.

範例: I prefer making lists on my phone because it is more flexible and faster than using paper. Additionally, phone apps can send notifications, which help me stay on top of my tasks.

× However, I also like put the ingredient in a particular order for each section so I don't waste anytime bye.

✓ However, I also like putting the ingredients in a particular order for each section so I don't waste any time by.

The verb 'like' should be followed by the gerund form 'putting' to indicate preference. Also, 'ingredient' should be plural 'ingredients' to match the context, and 'anytime bye' is incorrect; it should be 'any time by' or 'any time' as two words.

× I always keep on top my e-mail so I want to make sure I don't miss anything.

✓ I always keep on top of my e-mails so I want to make sure I don't miss anything.

The phrase 'keep on top' requires the preposition 'of' to be grammatically correct. Also, 'e-mail' should be plural 'e-mails' to indicate multiple messages.

× And to make sure I. I'm like at the same field of track of processing and completing my.

✓ And to make sure I am on the same track of processing and completing my tasks.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. It needs to be restructured to form a complete sentence with proper subject-verb agreement and clear meaning.

× The majority of people like to continue their tasks without without sticking with any list so.

✓ The majority of people like to continue their tasks without sticking to any list, so.

The phrase 'sticking with' is less appropriate here; 'sticking to' is the correct preposition to use with 'list'. Also, the repeated 'without' is an error.

× They keep a doing their processing. Without struggling with their list or filled with any pressure.

✓ They keep doing their tasks without struggling with their list or feeling any pressure.

The phrase 'keep a doing' is incorrect; it should be 'keep doing'. Also, 'filled with any pressure' should be 'feeling any pressure' to correctly express the idea.

× I prefer to make a list on my phone, I think it's so flexible.

✓ I prefer to make a list on my phone because I think it's very flexible.

The original sentence is a comma splice; it should be connected properly with a conjunction like 'because'. Also, 'so flexible' is informal; 'very flexible' is more appropriate.

× And also its way faster than making a list by opinion paper.

✓ And also it's much faster than making a list on paper.

The phrase 'way faster' is informal; 'much faster' is more appropriate. 'Opinion paper' is incorrect; it should be 'on paper'. Also, 'its' should be 'it's' (it is).

× Also it has like a notification so that you can like be on top of your processing.

✓ Also, it has notifications so that you can stay on top of your tasks.

The phrase 'like a notification' is informal and unclear; 'notifications' is better. 'Be on top of your processing' is awkward; 'stay on top of your tasks' is clearer and more natural.