列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is generally clear but contains some grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. To improve, use correct verb forms and avoid redundancy. For example, say "I make a shopping list before I go shopping because it helps me stay organized, prevents overspending, and ensures I remember everything I need."

範例: I always make a shopping list before I go shopping because it helps me stay organized, prevents me from overspending, and ensures I remember everything I need.

建議: Your answer has good content but is fragmented and has grammatical mistakes. Try to combine sentences smoothly and use correct verb agreement. For example, "Before I start working, I write a To-Do list that includes smaller tasks, their objectives, and the time I should spend on each. This helps me stay focused."

範例: Before I start working, I write a To-Do list that includes smaller tasks, their objectives, and the time I should spend on each. This helps me stay focused.

建議: Your answer is unclear and contains many errors and incomplete sentences. To improve, give a clear topic sentence and support it with specific reasons using linking words. For example, "Some people don't like making lists because they prefer to plan things in their heads. As long as they complete their tasks effectively and on time, this method works for them."

範例: Some people don't like making lists because they prefer to plan things in their heads. As long as they complete their tasks effectively and on time, this method works for them.

建議: Your answer has good points but is somewhat disorganized and contains errors. To improve, organize your ideas clearly and use linking words. For example, "I prefer to make lists on my phone because it's easier and more convenient since I always have it with me. Also, paper lists can be lost or damaged, but digital lists are saved for a long time."

範例: I prefer to make lists on my phone because it's easier and more convenient since I always have it with me. Also, paper lists can be lost or damaged, but digital lists are saved for a long time.

× Yes, the first thing I do before I go shopping is making my shopping list.

✓ Yes, the first thing I do before I go shopping is make my shopping list.

After the verb 'is' in this structure, the base form of the verb should be used, not the '-ing' form. 'Is making' is incorrect here; it should be 'is make'. This is a common error with verb complements after 'be' verbs.

× It helps me being organized and prevent and overspending and it also helped me remember everything I want.

✓ It helps me be organized and prevent overspending, and it also helps me remember everything I want.

After 'helps me', the base form of the verb should be used, not the '-ing' form. 'Being' should be 'be'. Also, 'prevent and overspending' is incorrect; it should be 'prevent overspending'. Additionally, 'helped' should be 'helps' to maintain present tense consistency.

× I write my To Do List which contains the tasks. Smaller tasks and the objective of each task and the time that I should be spending on these task.

✓ I write my To Do List which contains the tasks, smaller tasks, the objective of each task, and the time that I should be spending on these tasks.

The word 'task' should be plural 'tasks' to agree with 'these'. Also, the sentence was fragmented and needed commas to connect the list properly.

× This help me stay focused.

✓ This helps me stay focused.

The subject 'This' is third person singular, so the verb should be 'helps' to agree in number.

× In my opinion, different people have different preferences from people like making lists and others, don't they? Just come. They just plan things and their heads and it's OK as long as that.

✓ In my opinion, different people have different preferences; some people like making lists and others don't, right? Some just plan things in their heads and that's OK as long as they finish the job effectively and on time.

The original sentences were fragmented and unclear. 'Just come' is incorrect and likely a mishearing or typo. 'Plan things and their heads' should be 'plan things in their heads'. The sentence needed restructuring for clarity and grammatical correctness.

× As long as that. As long as they finish the job effectively and in time, it doesn't matter.

✓ As long as they finish the job effectively and on time, it doesn't matter.

'As long as that' is incomplete and incorrect. The correct phrase is 'As long as they finish the job effectively and on time'. Also, 'in time' is better expressed as 'on time' when referring to deadlines.

× I prefer to write a list on my phone 'cause it's easier and I haven't always working.

✓ I prefer to write a list on my phone because it's easier and I am always working.

'I haven't always working' is incorrect. The intended meaning is likely 'I am always working'. Also, 'cause' is informal; 'because' is more appropriate in formal speech.

× Also the paper could be lost, tiered or damaged in anyway.

✓ Also, the paper could be lost, torn, or damaged in any way.

'Tiered' is incorrect; the correct word is 'torn'. 'In anyway' should be 'in any way'. Commas are needed after 'Also' and between items in the list.

× But my phone. Yeah, in the phone it could be saved for longer periods of time.

✓ But my phone, yeah, on the phone it can be saved for longer periods of time.

The original sentences are fragmented. They should be combined for clarity. 'In the phone' should be 'on the phone'. 'Could' is less certain; 'can' is better to express ability.