列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is understandable but has grammatical errors and redundancy. Try to make your sentences clearer and more concise. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly. For example, start with a clear topic sentence and then explain why making a list is helpful.

範例: Yes, I always make a list before shopping because it helps me remember all the important items. This way, I avoid forgetting anything and save time while shopping.

建議: Your answer needs clearer structure and better grammar. Begin with a direct response, then explain how making a list helps you. Avoid vague phrases like 'forgetting particular' and use specific expressions.

範例: Yes, I make a list for my work because it helps me complete tasks on time. It reduces my stress by reminding me of important duties I might otherwise forget.

建議: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical mistakes. Use correct expressions and explain reasons clearly. Also, use linking words to connect ideas logically.

範例: It depends on the individual. Some people think making lists wastes time and adds unnecessary stress, so they prefer not to use them.

建議: Your answer is good but can be improved by correcting grammar and sentence structure. Use linking words to connect your ideas and avoid redundancy.

範例: I prefer making lists on my mobile phone because it is convenient and easily accessible. Moreover, I can quickly add or delete items without worrying about losing paper lists.

× Definitely I love to make list before going shopping becauses it it was it is very convenient way to remind all the things which are important while shopping.

✓ Definitely I love to make a list before going shopping because it is a very convenient way to remind all the things which are important while shopping.

The word 'list' is countable and singular here, so it needs the article 'a'. Also, 'becauses' is incorrect; it should be 'because'. The phrase 'it it was it is' is redundant and confusing; only 'it is' is needed to maintain present tense consistency. 'Very convenient way' requires the article 'a' before it.

× Surely. I like to make a list of my work as it helps me to do my work at their proper time without any stress regarding forgetting particular.

✓ Surely. I like to make a list of my work as it helps me to do my work at its proper time without any stress regarding forgetting particulars.

The pronoun 'their' is plural but refers to singular 'work', so it should be 'its'. Also, 'particular' should be plural 'particulars' to refer to specific items or details.

× It totally depends upon person to person. Some person consider it a wasted of time and an accessory answer stressful things.

✓ It totally depends upon person to person. Some people consider it a waste of time and an accessory to stressful things.

'Person' is singular; the plural form 'people' is needed here. 'Wasted' is an adjective but the correct noun form is 'waste'. The phrase 'an accessory answer stressful things' is unclear; likely intended as 'an accessory to stressful things'.

× I give more preference to make list on my mobile phone 'cause it is very convenient an accessible and whenever I need to add or delete some items, so I am not worrying about the losing of paper.

✓ I give more preference to making a list on my mobile phone because it is very convenient and accessible, and whenever I need to add or delete some items, I do not worry about losing paper.

The phrase 'give more preference to make list' should be 'give more preference to making a list' because 'preference to' is followed by a gerund. 'On my mobile phone' is correct. 'Cause' should be 'because' for formal clarity. 'An accessible' should be 'and accessible'. The phrase 'so I am not worrying about the losing of paper' is incorrect; it should be 'I do not worry about losing paper' to maintain proper tense and avoid unnecessary articles.