列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer has some grammar mistakes and unclear expressions, which affect naturalness and clarity. Try to use complete sentences and correct verb forms. Also, avoid redundancy and improve coherence by using linking words. For example, you can say: "I usually write down what I need before driving to the shop. However, I often don't stick to my list and end up buying other things, which makes me go over budget."

範例: I usually write down what I need before driving to the shop. However, I often don't stick to my list and end up buying other things, which makes me go over budget.

建議: Your answer has grammar errors and unclear phrases, which reduce effectiveness. Use correct articles and prepositions, and avoid incomplete sentences. Also, explain clearly how your list helps you. For example: "I am an organized person and like to stick to my plans. For example, I use a schedule on my iPad where I write down everything I need to do each day, and I check off tasks after completing them."

範例: I am an organized person and like to stick to my plans. For example, I use a schedule on my iPad where I write down everything I need to do each day, and I check off tasks after completing them.

建議: Your answer is unclear and contains grammar mistakes. Try to express your ideas clearly and use linking words to connect your points. For example: "I think some people dislike making lists because they prefer more freedom. Sticking strictly to a list can make them feel stressed or overwhelmed by the number of tasks they have to complete in a day."

範例: I think some people dislike making lists because they prefer more freedom. Sticking strictly to a list can make them feel stressed or overwhelmed by the number of tasks they have to complete in a day.

建議: Your answer is incomplete and has grammar errors. Try to complete your sentences and explain your preference clearly. For example: "Actually, my preference has changed over the years. I used to love writing lists on paper when I was in secondary school. But now, I usually use my iPad because it is more convenient for making schedules and managing tasks."

範例: Actually, my preference has changed over the years. I used to love writing lists on paper when I was in secondary school. But now, I usually use my iPad because it is more convenient for making schedules and managing tasks.

× I would write down what I need before I. Driving to the shop, but.

✓ I would write down what I need before I drive to the shop, but.

The verb after 'before I' should be in the base form (drive) rather than the present participle (driving) because it is a simple future or habitual action, not a continuous action.

× Are usually don't stick on my list, I will just run there around the shop and.

✓ I usually don't stick to my list, I will just run around the shop and

The correct preposition to use with 'stick' in this context is 'to', not 'on'. Also, 'Are' is incorrect and should be removed.

× I will get whatever I want when I sees it so it always gets over budget.

✓ I will get whatever I want when I see it so it always goes over budget.

The subject 'I' requires the verb 'see' without 's'. Also, 'gets over budget' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'goes over budget'.

× I think I'm a organized person and I love sticking on my plans.

✓ I think I'm an organized person and I love sticking to my plans.

The article 'a' should be 'an' before a vowel sound. Also, the correct preposition with 'sticking' is 'to', not 'on'.

× For example, I will have a. Schedule on my iPad and I would just mark down everything I need to do on that day and after it I will just take it.

✓ For example, I will have a schedule on my iPad and I would just mark down everything I need to do on that day and after that I will just take it.

The phrase 'after it' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'after that' to refer to the previous statement.

× And. Gwen Ifill.

This fragment 'And. Gwen Ifill.' is incomplete and unclear; it should be removed or completed to form a proper sentence.

× I think some people are less organized a frank.

✓ I think some people are less organized and frank.

The phrase 'a frank' is incorrect; 'and frank' is the correct conjunction and adjective usage here.

× They want to be more free. Because if you have just have to stick on the list, you may feel more stressed or you may be overwhelmed by how much things you have to do in one day without having less you.

✓ They want to be more free because if you just have to stick to the list, you may feel more stressed or you may be overwhelmed by how many things you have to do in one day without having less time for yourself.

The correct preposition with 'stick' is 'to', not 'on'. Also, 'how much things' should be 'how many things' because 'things' is countable. The phrase 'without having less you' is unclear and corrected to 'without having less time for yourself' for clarity.

× Actually, I have changed since over the years.

✓ Actually, I have changed over the years.

The phrase 'since over the years' is incorrect; 'over the years' is the correct expression to indicate a period of time.

× Before I love writing on paper.

✓ Before, I loved writing on paper.

The past habit should be expressed in the past tense 'loved' to match the time frame indicated by 'before'.

× When I was in secondary school, but for now because I usually use my iPad to do all the work and.

✓ When I was in secondary school, I loved writing on paper, but now I usually use my iPad to do all the work.

The original sentence is incomplete and fragmented. It should be combined properly to express the contrast between past and present habits.

× It is just more convenient to make a schedule on the iPad and it can also.

✓ It is just more convenient to make a schedule on the iPad and it can also be easily updated.

The sentence is incomplete; it needs a completion to express what 'it can also' do.