列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is generally clear and relevant, but there are some grammatical errors and awkward phrasing that affect naturalness. Also, avoid redundancy and improve sentence structure. Try to use linking words to connect ideas smoothly. For example, instead of 'I usually list to close grocery and household essential', say 'I usually list close groceries and household essentials'.

範例: Yes, I always make a list when I go shopping because it helps me stay organized and ensures I don't forget any important items. For instance, I usually list groceries and household essentials, which saves me time and prevents unnecessary purchases.

建議: Your answer is relevant but contains grammatical mistakes and lacks linking words. Also, the phrase 'at their proper time' is unclear. Try to be more specific and use linking words to improve coherence. For example, use 'because it helps me complete my tasks on time and avoid forgetting anything.'

範例: Yes, I always make a list for my work because it helps me complete my tasks on time and avoid forgetting anything important.

建議: Your answer is unclear and contains several grammatical errors. Avoid confusing phrases like 'It took it totally depends upon the person to person twice.' Instead, directly state your opinion with clear reasons and linking words. For example, 'I think some people dislike making lists because they find it stressful and feel pressured while working.'

範例: I believe some people don't like making lists because they find it stressful and feel pressured to complete all the tasks on time.

建議: Your answer is relevant but has minor grammatical errors and could be more concise. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly. For example, 'I prefer making lists on my mobile phone because it saves time and is very convenient. Moreover, I can easily add or delete items without worrying about losing paper lists.'

範例: I prefer making lists on my mobile phone because it saves time and is very convenient. Moreover, I can easily add or delete items without worrying about losing paper lists.

× Definitely, I will always make a list when I go shopping because it helps me stay organized and ensure I don't for get any important item.

✓ Definitely, I always make a list when I go shopping because it helps me stay organized and ensures I don't forget any important item.

The use of 'will' is unnecessary here as the sentence talks about a habitual action, so present simple tense is appropriate. Also, 'ensure' should be 'ensures' to agree with the singular subject 'it'. 'For get' is a typo and should be 'forget'.

× For example, I usually list to close grocery and household essential which saves me time and prevent unnecessary purchase.

✓ For example, I usually list close groceries and household essentials which save me time and prevent unnecessary purchases.

The nouns 'grocery' and 'essential' should be plural ('groceries' and 'essentials') to match the context. Also, 'purchase' should be plural 'purchases' as it refers to multiple items. The verbs 'saves' and 'prevent' should agree with the plural subject 'groceries and household essentials', so 'save' and 'prevent' are correct.

× Yeah, of course I make a list for my work becauses it helps me to do my work at their proper time without worrying about forgetting.

✓ Yeah, of course I make a list for my work because it helps me to do my work at the proper time without worrying about forgetting.

The word 'becauses' is a typo and should be 'because'. 'Their' is incorrect here as it refers to plural possessive; 'the' is appropriate to specify 'proper time'.

× It took it totally depends upon the person to person twice.

✓ It totally depends upon the person.

The original sentence is confusing and contains unnecessary words 'It took it' and 'to person twice'. Simplifying to 'It totally depends upon the person' makes the sentence clear and grammatically correct.

× I think that the person don't like to make list because they think that it is an accessory stress and pressure while working.

✓ I think that the person doesn't like to make a list because they think that it is an unnecessary stress and pressure while working.

'Person' is singular, so the verb should be 'doesn't' instead of 'don't'. Also, 'make list' should be 'make a list' to include the article. 'Accessory' is incorrect here; 'unnecessary' fits better to describe stress and pressure.

× I give more preference to mobile phone as it is saves my time and also very convenient and accessible.

✓ I prefer the mobile phone as it saves my time and is also very convenient and accessible.

'Give more preference to' is awkward; 'prefer' is more natural. 'It is saves' is incorrect; it should be 'it saves'. Also, 'the mobile phone' is better with the definite article here.

× And I easily delete and add items without worrying about losing papers.

✓ I can easily delete and add items without worrying about losing papers.

Starting a sentence with 'And' is informal and can be avoided. Adding 'can' clarifies ability. The sentence is clearer and more formal this way.