列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is understandable but has grammatical errors and lacks clarity. Try to form a clear topic sentence and use correct grammar. Also, avoid redundancy and keep your answer concise within 5 sentences.

範例: Yes, I always make a shopping list before I go to the store because it helps me remember everything I need to buy and saves time.

建議: Your answer is relevant but contains grammatical mistakes and could be more coherent. Use linking words to connect ideas and correct sentence structure for clarity.

範例: Yes, I usually make a list of my tasks because it helps me stay organized and focused. Moreover, it ensures that I complete my work on time.

建議: Good attempt to explain reasons, but the sentence structure and word choice need improvement. Use clearer linking words and correct grammar to express your ideas more naturally.

範例: I think it depends on the individual. Some people find making lists stressful because they feel pressured to complete all tasks, especially when they struggle to finish everything on time.

建議: Your answer is clear and relevant but has minor grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. Try to use smoother linking phrases and correct sentence structure for better flow.

範例: I prefer to make lists on my phone because it is more convenient and accessible. For example, I can quickly add or delete items without worrying about losing a paper list.

× Definitely I make less.

✓ Definitely I make fewer.

The word 'less' is used with uncountable nouns, but 'list' is countable, so 'fewer' is the correct quantifier here.

× Before going to shopping the 'cause it helps me to remind my all things which I have to. Buy from shop.

✓ Before going shopping because it helps me to remember all the things I have to buy from the shop.

The phrase 'going to shopping' is incorrect; it should be 'going shopping'. Also, 'remind my all things' is incorrect; it should be 'remember all the things'. The sentence structure was fragmented and needed correction for clarity.

× Yes, I usually make a list of my work becauses it helps me stay organized and focus and it also helps me to do my work at their proper time.

✓ Yes, I usually make a list of my work because it helps me stay organized and focused, and it also helps me to do my work at the proper time.

The word 'becauses' is a typo and should be 'because'. Also, 'focus' should be 'focused' to maintain parallel structure. 'Their proper time' is incorrect; it should be 'the proper time'.

× Some people find making list stressful because they feel a necessity pressure to complete the task, especially if they should struggle to finish everything on time.

✓ Some people find making lists stressful because they feel necessary pressure to complete the tasks, especially if they struggle to finish everything on time.

'Making list' should be 'making lists' to match plural usage. 'Necessity pressure' is incorrect; 'necessary pressure' is correct. 'The task' should be 'the tasks' to agree with plural context.

× I prefer to make list on my phone because it's more convenient and accessible.

✓ I prefer to make a list on my phone because it's more convenient and accessible.

'Make list' is incorrect; it should be 'make a list' because 'list' is a countable noun and requires an article here.

× For instance, I can quickly add or delete items anything from without worrying about losing the paper.

✓ For instance, I can quickly add or delete any items without worrying about losing the paper.

The phrase 'items anything from' is incorrect and redundant. 'Any items' is the correct phrase. Also, 'from' is unnecessary and should be removed.