列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is unclear and contains repetition. Try to give a clear and direct response with specific examples. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

範例: I usually make a shopping list when I need to buy many items. For example, before going to the supermarket, I write down all the things I need to remember.

建議: Your answer is fragmented and lacks coherence. Try to form complete sentences and explain your reasons clearly using linking words.

範例: I don't usually make lists for my work because I prefer a flexible lifestyle. However, sometimes I organize my tasks depending on my schedule and workload.

建議: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to express your opinion clearly and explain why you feel that way with specific reasons.

範例: I don't like making lists because I find them too restrictive. They make me feel pressured, so I prefer to work more freely.

建議: Your answer has grammar mistakes and is somewhat unclear. Try to use correct verb forms and explain your preference clearly with reasons.

範例: I usually don't make lists, but if I have to, I prefer to write them on my phone because my handwriting is poor.

× It depends on different situation.

✓ It depends on different situations.

The noun 'situation' should be plural 'situations' because 'different' implies more than one situation. In English, when referring to multiple instances, the plural form is required.

× For example I have to show when I have to show.

✓ For example, I have to shop when I have to shop.

The original sentence is unclear and likely contains a typo. 'Show' should be 'shop' to make sense in context. Also, a comma is needed after 'For example' to separate the introductory phrase.

× A lot of items I write, I write the list for my memory.

✓ I write a list of many items to help my memory.

The original sentence has incorrect word order and redundancy. Correct English sentence structure places the subject before the verb and clarifies the purpose of writing the list.

× Actually I'm not make a list for my work because I'm I prefer freely life, free lifestyle and also I do my work.

✓ Actually, I don't make a list for my work because I prefer a free lifestyle, and I also do my work accordingly.

The sentence has incorrect verb form 'I'm not make' which should be 'I don't make'. Also, 'freely life' is incorrect; it should be 'a free lifestyle'. The pronoun 'I'm I' is redundant and incorrect. Adding commas improves readability.

× Depends on my. Schedule an. Condition.

✓ It depends on my schedule and condition.

The original sentence is fragmented and lacks a subject. Complete sentences require a subject and verb. Also, 'an' should be 'and'.

× That's me.

✓ That's me.

This sentence is grammatically correct and needs no correction.

× I don't prefer making this when I shopping or when I working because it is very stick.

✓ I don't prefer making lists when I am shopping or working because it is very strict.

The verb forms 'I shopping' and 'I working' are incorrect; they should be 'I am shopping' and 'I am working'. The word 'stick' is incorrect in this context; 'strict' is appropriate. Also, 'making this' is vague; 'making lists' is clearer.

× I felt so. I do like it.

✓ I don't like it.

The original sentences are unclear and contradictory. The intended meaning is likely 'I don't like it.' Using a single clear sentence improves understanding.

× I don't prefer making list, but if I had to make a list, list I will wrote on my phone because.

✓ I don't prefer making lists, but if I have to make a list, I will write it on my phone because

'Making list' should be 'making lists' (plural). 'If I had to' should be 'if I have to' to match present/future context. 'List I will wrote' is incorrect; correct is 'I will write it'. 'Wrote' is past tense; 'write' is present/future tense.

× My hand right skill is very bad.

✓ My handwriting is very bad.

'My hand right skill' is incorrect. The correct term is 'handwriting' to describe writing ability. This is a noun, not a skill of the right hand.