列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical errors and awkward phrasing, such as 'before stopping' instead of 'before shopping' and 'sapins' which seems to be a typo. To improve, focus on clear and correct sentence structure, avoid redundancy, and use linking words to connect ideas smoothly. Also, keep your answer concise and directly related to the question.

範例: I usually don't make a shopping list because I prefer to be spontaneous. I like to browse the aisles and choose items I need as I go, rather than planning everything in advance.

建議: Your answer is confusing due to unclear phrasing and some errors like 'sobbing' instead of 'shopping' and 'enlist' instead of 'a list'. To improve, answer directly with clear sentences, use linking words to explain differences, and avoid unnecessary words. Make sure your sentences are grammatically correct and easy to understand.

範例: Making a list for work is different from shopping because I need to complete specific tasks. Therefore, I always prepare a to-do list before going to the office to stay organized and efficient.

建議: Your answer has some unclear parts and grammatical mistakes, such as 'organize an insured' which seems incorrect. To improve, provide clear reasons with specific details, use linking words to connect ideas, and avoid sentence fragments. Make sure your vocabulary fits the context.

範例: Some people dislike making lists because they feel it limits their freedom. On the other hand, others prefer lists to stay organized and ensure they complete all their tasks efficiently.

建議: Your answer is generally clear but contains minor errors like 'ride it' instead of 'write it'. To improve, correct these mistakes, use linking words to connect your reasons, and avoid redundancy. Also, try to make your sentences more natural and fluent.

範例: I usually prefer making lists on my phone because it's faster and more convenient. Also, I can easily write or edit my list even when I'm in public places.

× I usually don't prefer to make a list before stopping as I feel it is kind of restrictive for me to a make a list as I'm a very spontaneous person.

✓ I usually don't prefer to make a list before shopping as I feel it is kind of restrictive for me to make a list as I'm a very spontaneous person.

The word 'stopping' is incorrect here; the correct preposition and verb should be 'shopping' to match the context of buying items. 'Stopping' is a verb meaning to cease movement, which does not fit the intended meaning.

× I like to browse through the sapins purchase items which I find necessary by myself instead of making a list.

✓ I like to browse through the aisles and purchase items which I find necessary by myself instead of making a list.

The word 'sapins' is incorrect and likely a typo. The correct word is 'aisles' which refers to the passages between shelves in a store. Also, 'purchase items' should be connected properly with 'and' to indicate two actions.

× It is kind of different from sobbing as making a list for shopping and making a list for work is very different as I have to complete my task.

✓ It is kind of different from shopping as making a list for shopping and making a list for work are very different since I have to complete my tasks.

The word 'sobbing' is incorrect; it should be 'shopping' to fit the context. Also, 'task' should be plural 'tasks' to match the context of multiple work tasks.

× Straightforwardly in our office, so I prepare enlist whenever I go to work before.

✓ Straightforwardly in our office, so I prepare a list whenever I go to work beforehand.

The phrase 'prepare enlist' is incorrect; it should be 'prepare a list'. Also, 'before' should be 'beforehand' to indicate prior preparation.

× Some people don't like making list or prepare anything before they do any task as they think it is kind of restrictive for them.

✓ Some people don't like making lists or preparing anything before they do any task as they think it is kind of restrictive for them.

The word 'list' should be plural 'lists' to agree with 'making'. Also, 'prepare' should be 'preparing' to maintain parallel structure with 'making'.

× Which is also why some people make a list as they want to organize an insured.

✓ This is also why some people make a list as they want to stay organized.

The sentence fragment starting with 'Which' is incorrect. It should be connected properly. Also, 'organize an insured' is incorrect; the intended phrase is likely 'stay organized'.

× They do everything there that they write on their list.

✓ They do everything that they write on their list.

The word 'there' is unnecessary and incorrect in this sentence and should be removed for clarity.

× I usually prefer to make a list on my phone rather than on paper as it helps me do it faster, it is more convenient and it gives me more freedom as I can ride it.

✓ I usually prefer to make a list on my phone rather than on paper as it helps me do it faster, it is more convenient and it gives me more freedom as I can write it.

The word 'ride' is incorrect; the correct verb is 'write' to indicate recording the list.

× Even on public places.

✓ Even in public places.

The correct preposition to use with 'public places' is 'in' rather than 'on'.