列表— Part 1 評分報告
對話
Part 1
考官
Do you make a list when you shop?
考生
Yes, I do make a list when I shop. However, most of the time I can't really follow my list. It is because some of the items that I have listed is not in the market. So what I am doing is changing it and having, I mean having an alternative and changing it into something that the market has.
考官
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
考生
Actually I don't have really a list for my work. I don't know if you can call it a list for work because I'm still a student but I am having OJT or on the job training. And yes we do have a list and what to do depending on what our patient needs. Like for example my patient is a child so I am making a time taping to monitor my Childs Ivy.
考官
Why don't some people like making lists?
考生
Sometimes I do not like to make a list, it is because it is very confusing. And when time or when, yeah, when something doesn't go my way, I make a fuse about it. And that is what how I think people think also. And you know that feeling when you are making a fuss about something?
考官
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
考生
Well, as a nursing student especially, I mean as a student, yes, I prefer to make a list on my phone rather than on paper an it is because. My phone can organize things and it is much easier and I don't have the nice penmanship, that's why.
評估
總分
Part 1
Do you make a list when you shop?
分數: 75.0建議: Your answer is clear and relevant but can be improved by using more natural phrasing and avoiding redundancy. Try to use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly and correct subject-verb agreement (e.g., 'items are' instead of 'items is'). Also, keep your sentences concise and avoid repeating the same idea.
範例: Yes, I usually make a shopping list, but I often can't follow it exactly because some items are unavailable. Therefore, I choose alternatives that the market offers to replace them.
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
分數: 70.0建議: Your answer provides relevant information but lacks clarity and contains some grammatical errors. Try to organize your ideas better by starting with a clear topic sentence, then adding specific details. Use linking words to connect your points and check your vocabulary (e.g., 'time taping' should be 'time charting' or 'time recording', and 'Childs Ivy' should be 'child's IV').
範例: I don't usually make a formal list for work since I'm still a student doing on-the-job training. However, we do have schedules based on patients' needs. For example, when caring for a child patient, I record the timing to monitor the child's IV.
Why don't some people like making lists?
分數: 65.0建議: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains informal expressions and repetition. To improve, express your ideas more clearly and use appropriate linking words. Avoid filler words like 'yeah' and correct phrases such as 'make a fuse' to 'make a fuss'. Also, try to give a more general reason why some people dislike making lists.
範例: Some people dislike making lists because they find it confusing. Also, when things don't go as planned, they tend to get frustrated, which makes list-making less appealing.
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
分數: 80.0建議: Your answer is relevant and mostly clear but can be improved by avoiding hesitations and redundant phrases. Use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly and correct minor grammar mistakes (e.g., 'an it is because' should be 'because').
範例: As a student, I prefer making lists on my phone because it helps me organize tasks easily. Also, since my handwriting is not very neat, using my phone is more convenient.
文法
× It is because some of the items that I have listed is not in the market.
✓ It is because some of the items that I have listed are not in the market.
The subject 'items' is plural, so the verb should be 'are' instead of 'is' to agree in number. This is a singular and plural issue.
× Like for example my patient is a child so I am making a time taping to monitor my Childs Ivy.
✓ Like for example my patient is a child so I am making a time taping to monitor my child's IV.
The word 'Childs' should be possessive 'child's' to show ownership, and 'Ivy' should be 'IV' (intravenous). This is a singular and plural issue related to possessive form.
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