列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và có lỗi ngữ pháp, đồng thời có sự lặp từ và câu không hoàn chỉnh. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi với câu chủ đề rõ ràng, tránh lặp từ và sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh, ví dụ như: "Yes, I usually make a list when I shop because it helps me remember what I need and saves time."

範例: Yes, I usually make a list when I shop because it helps me remember what I need and saves time.

建議: Câu trả lời của bạn có ý chính rõ ràng nhưng có lỗi ngữ pháp và từ lặp lại, câu cuối không rõ nghĩa. Bạn nên sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh, tránh lặp từ và dùng liên từ để câu mạch lạc hơn, ví dụ: "Yes, I always make a list for my work because it helps me stay organized and saves time."

範例: Yes, I always make a list for my work because it helps me stay organized and saves time.

建議: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng, có lỗi ngữ pháp và câu không hoàn chỉnh. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và giải thích cụ thể hơn, ví dụ: "Some people don't like making lists because it takes too much time and they find it unnecessary."

範例: Some people don't like making lists because it takes too much time and they find it unnecessary.

建議: Câu trả lời của bạn rất khó hiểu do lỗi phát âm và ngữ pháp, câu không hoàn chỉnh. Bạn nên trả lời rõ ràng, sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và giải thích lý do, ví dụ: "I prefer to make a list on paper because writing it down helps me remember better and stay focused."

範例: I prefer to make a list on paper because writing it down helps me remember better and stay focused.

× Yeah, actually I usually do that because I'm not good at remembering remembering things.

✓ Yeah, actually I usually do that because I'm not good at remembering things.

The repetition of the word 'remembering' is a typographical error and should be corrected to a single instance to maintain clarity and grammatical correctness.

× So is my daily routine.

✓ It is part of my daily routine.

The original sentence lacks a clear subject and verb, making it incomplete. Adding 'It is part of' clarifies the meaning and corrects the sentence structure.

× Before soaping.

✓ Before shopping.

The word 'soaping' is likely a typographical error for 'shopping'. Correcting this word makes the sentence meaningful and grammatically correct.

× So I usually list down everything I need when working.

✓ So I usually list down everything I need when I am working.

The phrase 'when working' is a reduced clause that can be unclear. Adding 'I am' clarifies the subject and verb, making the sentence grammatically correct.

× Making a list can help me to stay organized and save saves times an it can help me too.

✓ Making a list can help me to stay organized and save time, and it can help me too.

The word 'saves' is incorrect here; it should be 'save' to match the modal verb 'can'. Also, 'times' should be singular 'time' in this context. The sentence also needs proper conjunction and punctuation for clarity.

× In my opinion, I do believe that there are many reasons for people not making a list before I working or studying because it takes so many times for them to list all the things they need or all of the thing they remember.

✓ In my opinion, I believe that there are many reasons why people do not make a list before working or studying because it takes a lot of time for them to list all the things they need or remember.

The original sentence has several issues: 'I do believe' is redundant, 'before I working' is incorrect and should be 'before working', 'so many times' should be 'a lot of time', and 'all of the thing' should be 'all the things'. These corrections improve grammatical accuracy and clarity.

× But like my college and they do not make a list.

✓ But, like my colleagues, they do not make a list.

The phrase 'like my college' is likely a typo for 'like my colleagues'. Also, the sentence needs a comma after 'But' for correct punctuation and clarity.

× Hi, you know I'm less of UR remember in our in my hats.

✓ Hi, you know I'm less of a rememberer in my head.

The original sentence contains unclear and incorrect pronouns and words ('UR', 'our', 'hats'). Replacing with 'a rememberer in my head' clarifies the intended meaning and corrects pronoun usage.

× I'm more of a writing down position so that I always write a list down in a paper when I need it.

✓ I'm more of a writing-down person, so I always write a list down on paper when I need it.

The phrase 'writing down position' is incorrect; 'writing-down person' is more appropriate. Also, 'in a paper' should be 'on paper' as the correct preposition for writing surfaces.

× Can help me too. Less time consuming and stay focus on what I need to.

✓ It can help me too. It is less time-consuming and helps me stay focused on what I need to do.

The original sentences are fragments and lack subjects and verbs. Adding 'It' and correcting verb forms and adjectives ('time-consuming', 'focused') makes the sentences complete and grammatically correct.