列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 你的回答中有语法错误和表达不自然的地方，比如“open make a list on before I'm shopping”不符合英语习惯。建议简化句子结构，直接表达观点，并用连词连接句子，使表达更流畅。

範例: Yes, I always make a shopping list before I go to the supermarket because it helps me avoid buying unnecessary items. For example, I usually write down what I need on my phone to keep track.

建議: 回答中存在语法错误和词汇使用不当，如“make her to do this stuff”不清楚。建议使用简单明了的句子，准确表达观点，并用连接词使内容连贯。

範例: Yes, I definitely make lists for my work every day. They help me manage my tasks efficiently and avoid wasting time. For example, by following my list, I can complete all important jobs on time.

建議: 回答中有拼写错误和表达不清晰的问题，如“go with their own piece”应为“go with their own pace”。建议注意词汇准确性，并用连词使句子更连贯。

範例: Some people don't like making lists because they feel lists are too restrictive. They prefer to go with their own pace instead of planning every detail. Also, making lists can take time, so they may think it's unnecessary.

建議: 回答中有不完整和不连贯的句子，如“I prefer to.”后面缺少内容。建议完整表达观点，避免断句，并用连接词使表达更自然。

範例: Personally, I prefer using my phone to make lists because it's more convenient. I can easily add or remove items, and it's easier to carry my phone than a paper list.

× Yes, open make a list on before I'm shopping.

✓ Yes, I make a list before I go shopping.

句中“open make a list on before I'm shopping”结构混乱，且“open”无意义，应删除。正确表达是“I make a list before I go shopping”，表示习惯动作。

× Because it can help me avoid by him unnecessary things.

✓ Because it can help me avoid buying unnecessary things.

“avoid by him unnecessary things”中“by him”用法错误，且“avoid”后应接动名词形式，故改为“avoid buying unnecessary things”。

× For example, when I go to, before I go to a supermarket, I will write down what I need to buy on my phone.

✓ For example, before I go to a supermarket, I will write down what I need to buy on my phone.

“when I go to,”后缺少地点，且重复“before I go to a supermarket”，应删去多余部分，保持句子通顺。

× It work definitely.

✓ It works definitely.

主语“It”是第三人称单数，谓语动词“work”应加-s，变为“works”。

× I make her to do this stuff for my work every day and it works very well.

✓ I make sure to do this stuff for my work every day and it works very well.

“make her to do”用法错误，且语境应为“确保做某事”，故改为“make sure to do”。

× It helps me manage the manage my tasks and avoid wasting time efficiently.

✓ It helps me manage my tasks and avoid wasting time efficiently.

“manage the manage my tasks”重复且多余，应删去一个“manage”。

× For example, by following my list I can write all retiz important jobs and the finish everything on.

✓ For example, by following my list I can write all the important jobs and finish everything.

“write all retiz important jobs and the finish everything on”语序混乱且“retiz”无意义，应改为“write all the important jobs and finish everything”。

× Some people don't like making lists because they think lists are too restrictive.

✓ Some people don't like making lists because they think lists are too restrictive.

该句无明显语法错误，保持原句。

× They prefer to go with their own piece instead of planning every detail.

✓ They prefer to go with their own pace instead of planning every detail.

“piece”应为“pace”，意为“节奏”，拼写错误。

× Making this come also take time, so they might think it's not necessary.

✓ Making this can also take time, so they might think it's not necessary.

“come”应为“can”，表示可能性，且“take”应与“can”搭配。

× Well, personally speaking, I prefer to.

✓ Well, personally speaking, I prefer to use my phone.

句子不完整，“prefer to”后应接动词或动词短语，补充完整。

× I prefer using my phone because it's more convenient.

✓ I prefer using my phone because it's more convenient.

该句无明显语法错误，保持原句。

× Or I need to add it all right things and it's also easier to carry around that paper list.

✓ Also, I can add all the right things and it's also easier to carry around than a paper list.

“Or”用法错误，应为“Also”或“Besides”，且“that paper list”应为“than a paper list”表示比较。