列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Câu trả lời của bạn khá tự nhiên và có cấu trúc cơ bản, tuy nhiên có một số lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không chính xác (ví dụ: 'sharp' thay vì 'shop', 'browser' thay vì 'browse'). Bạn nên chú ý phát âm và chọn từ chính xác hơn để câu trả lời hiệu quả và rõ ràng hơn. Ngoài ra, câu cuối cùng bị thiếu từ hoặc không hoàn chỉnh, bạn nên hoàn thiện câu để tránh gây hiểu nhầm.

範例: I don't enjoy shopping very much, so I don't go often. However, when I do, I usually make a list because it helps me shop more efficiently and saves time. For instance, having a list means I don't have to wander around the store looking for items, which makes the process less stressful and quicker.

建議: Câu trả lời của bạn có ý tưởng rõ ràng nhưng có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không chính xác (ví dụ: 'rule calendar', 'nysed an managed', 'world world calendar'). Bạn nên sử dụng từ vựng chính xác và câu hoàn chỉnh để truyền đạt ý hiệu quả hơn. Ngoài ra, câu cuối cùng bị cắt ngắn, bạn nên hoàn thiện ý tưởng để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

範例: Yes, I make lists for my work because I tend to be quite disorganized. Recently, I started using a digital calendar app which helps me stay organized and manage my time more efficiently. Unlike a traditional paper calendar, it allows me to set reminders and review my schedule easily, which has really improved my productivity.

建議: Câu trả lời của bạn có ý tưởng nhưng bị lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng nghiêm trọng (ví dụ: 'making Liz', 'suppose making a list and might be time consuming', câu cuối không hoàn chỉnh). Bạn cần luyện tập cách diễn đạt rõ ràng, sử dụng từ vựng chính xác và hoàn chỉnh câu để ý tưởng được truyền đạt hiệu quả hơn.

範例: In my opinion, some people dislike making lists because they think it takes too much time. Additionally, some find it easier to remember tasks without writing them down, so they prefer to rely on their memory instead.

建議: Câu trả lời của bạn có ý chính rõ ràng nhưng có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng (ví dụ: 'wall calendar', 'it it automatically sent reminders', câu cuối không hoàn chỉnh). Bạn nên sử dụng từ vựng chính xác, câu hoàn chỉnh và tránh lặp từ để câu trả lời tự nhiên và hiệu quả hơn.

範例: As I mentioned earlier, I prefer making lists on my phone because it's more convenient. For example, my phone automatically sends me reminders, and I can easily update or access my lists anytime.

× it helps me sharp more efficiently and saves a lot of time

✓ it helps me shop more efficiently and saves a lot of time

The verb 'sharp' is incorrect here; the correct verb is 'shop'. The verb 'shop' is used in its base form after 'helps me' to indicate the action performed. Using the correct verb improves clarity and meaning.

× I don't have to wonder or browser store looking for the items

✓ I don't have to wander or browse stores looking for the items

The verbs 'wonder' and 'browser' are incorrect in this context. The correct verbs are 'wander' (to walk around) and 'browse' (to look through). Both should be in base form after 'have to'. This correction clarifies the intended meaning.

× which makes the whole process less stressful and more and

✓ which makes the whole process less stressful and more efficient

The phrase 'more and' is incomplete and unclear. It should be completed with an appropriate adjective like 'efficient' to convey the intended meaning. This correction fixes the sentence structure and meaning.

× I tend to be quite disorganized and a bit lazy. So recently I started using rule calendar which helps me stay out nysed an managed my time more efficiently

✓ I tend to be quite disorganized and a bit lazy. So recently I started using a rule calendar which helps me stay organized and manage my time more efficiently

The phrase 'stay out nysed an managed' is incorrect and unclear. It should be 'stay organized and manage' to correctly express the intended meaning. Also, 'a' is needed before 'rule calendar' as it is a singular countable noun. This correction improves clarity and grammar.

× Compared to a traditional world world calendar, it allows me to set reminders and assess my schedule anyway, which really improves my

✓ Compared to a traditional wall calendar, it allows me to set reminders and access my schedule anywhere, which really improves my productivity

The phrase 'world world calendar' is a typo and should be 'wall calendar'. 'Assess my schedule anyway' is incorrect; it should be 'access my schedule anywhere'. Also, the sentence is incomplete and needs a proper ending like 'improves my productivity'. These corrections fix typos and improve sentence completeness.

× the reason why some people don't like making Liz is because they suppose making a list and might be time consuming

✓ the reason why some people don't like making lists is because they suppose making a list might be time consuming

'Liz' is a typo and should be 'lists'. The phrase 'they suppose making a list and might be time consuming' is incorrect; it should be 'they suppose making a list might be time consuming'. This correction fixes pronoun and sentence structure errors.

× Furthermore, and some people find it easier to come to remember all the task without writing them down an also making a

✓ Furthermore, some people find it easier to remember all the tasks without writing them down and also making a list

The conjunction 'and' after 'Furthermore,' is unnecessary and disrupts sentence flow. 'Come to remember' is incorrect; it should be 'remember'. 'Task' should be plural 'tasks'. The sentence is incomplete and should end with 'making a list'. These corrections improve conjunction use and sentence completeness.

× I started using wall calendar which mean I preferred to make a list on my phone because making a list on my phone is more convenient

✓ I started using a wall calendar which means I prefer to make a list on my phone because making a list on my phone is more convenient

'Wall calendar' needs the article 'a'. 'Mean' should be 'means' to agree with singular subject. 'Preferred' should be 'prefer' to maintain present tense consistency. These corrections fix preposition and verb tense errors.

× By saying it it is more convenient, I mean it it automatically sent reminders to me and also I can accept

✓ By saying it is more convenient, I mean it automatically sends reminders to me and also I can access them

The phrase 'it it' is a repetition error and should be 'it is'. 'Sent' should be 'sends' to agree with present tense and third person singular subject. 'Accept' is incorrect; the intended word is likely 'access'. These corrections fix adverb placement and verb form errors.