列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to respond directly to the question with a clear topic sentence and supporting details. Use simple and correct English to express your ideas naturally and effectively.

範例: No, I usually do not make a list when I go shopping because I prefer to buy things spontaneously. However, sometimes I might forget important items if I don't plan ahead.

建議: Your answer is confusing and has grammatical mistakes. Please answer directly with a clear topic sentence and explain how making a list helps you. Use linking words to connect your ideas logically.

範例: Yes, I often make a list for my work because it helps me remember important tasks. As a result, I can complete my work more efficiently and avoid forgetting anything.

建議: Your answer is incomplete and unclear. Please provide a full sentence with a reason why some people dislike making lists. Add supporting details to enrich your answer.

範例: Some people do not like making lists because they find it time-consuming and prefer to rely on their memory instead.

建議: Your answer is relevant but has some grammatical errors and redundancy. Try to make your sentences clear and concise, and use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

範例: I prefer to make lists on my phone because it is convenient to carry. Also, I sometimes forget paper lists at home, but I rarely forget my phone.

× No, I had never made a list of why I'm going for shopping.

✓ No, I have never made a list when I go shopping.

The original sentence incorrectly uses the past perfect tense 'had never made' which is not appropriate here. The present perfect 'have never made' is suitable to express an experience up to now. Also, 'of why I'm going for shopping' is incorrect; it should be 'when I go shopping' to indicate the time of shopping.

× I rather prefer to show bird ever alike.

✓ I prefer not to make a list.

The original sentence is nonsensical and does not convey a clear meaning. The phrase 'show bird ever alike' is incorrect and irrelevant. The corrected sentence clearly expresses the intended meaning.

× Nard with not going with the list.

✓ I usually go shopping without a list.

The original sentence is grammatically incorrect and unclear. 'Nard with not going with the list' is not proper English. The correction provides a clear and grammatically correct sentence.

× Many times I had made our list for my work, yes, and of course it has walked the Lord as I do not forget things easily and also there are more chances of getting my work done.

✓ Many times I have made a list for my work, yes, and of course it has worked well as I do not forget things easily and there are more chances of getting my work done.

The original sentence incorrectly uses past perfect 'had made' instead of present perfect 'have made' to indicate repeated actions up to now. 'It has walked the Lord' is incorrect; it should be 'it has worked well'. The correction improves clarity and grammar.

× Before laughing in 10.

✓ (This sentence is unclear and seems incomplete; it should be omitted or clarified.)

The sentence 'Before laughing in 10' is incomplete and does not make sense. It should be clarified or removed.

× I feel that some people are the.

✓ I feel that some people do not like making lists.

The original sentence is incomplete and unclear. The correction completes the thought and makes the sentence meaningful.

× I prefer to make list on my phone because it is more convenient to carry and also it happened with me that I forget my list of paper at home only and I know that I would never, I would never. Forgot my phone at home.

✓ I prefer to make a list on my phone because it is more convenient to carry, and also it has happened to me that I forgot my paper list at home, but I know that I would never forget my phone at home.

The original sentence has incorrect prepositions: 'make list on' should be 'make a list on'; 'happened with me' should be 'happened to me'; 'forget my list of paper' should be 'forgot my paper list'. Also, tense consistency is improved by using present perfect 'has happened' and past tense 'forgot'. The correction improves grammar and clarity.