列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答中语法不完整，表达不够自然，建议使用完整句子并说明原因，例如如何节省时间。

範例: Yes, I always make a list when I go shopping because it helps me save time by keeping me focused on what I need to buy.

建議: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不连贯，建议使用完整句子并用连接词使内容更流畅。

範例: Yes, I make a list for my work because it helps me save time and prevents me from forgetting important tasks. Besides work, I also make lists for shopping and traveling.

建議: 回答表达不清晰，语法错误，建议用完整句子并具体说明原因，使用连接词。

範例: Some people don't like making lists because they find it troublesome, and others feel that lists restrict their freedom.

建議: 回答中断句不自然，建议使用连贯句子并用连接词连接观点，使表达更流畅。

範例: I prefer to make lists on my phone because it is more convenient and portable. Moreover, I can check my list anytime and anywhere.

× Yes, I will make a list when I go shopping.

✓ Yes, I make a list when I go shopping.

这里的回答是关于习惯性的动作，应该使用一般现在时而不是将来时。将来时（will）表示未来发生的动作，而习惯性动作用一般现在时。

× The list because the list can save my time.

✓ I make a list because it can save me time.

原句缺少主语和谓语，句子结构不完整。需要补充主语和谓语，使句子完整通顺。

× Because it helps me save time and allowed forgetting important items.

✓ Because it helps me save time and prevents me from forgetting important items.

这里“allowed”用错了时态和词义，应该用现在时的动词来表达“防止忘记”，且“forgetting”前需要加介词短语。

× Not only make a list from my work, but also make a list for shopping, traveling and so all.

✓ Not only do I make a list for my work, but I also make a list for shopping, traveling, and so on.

原句缺少主语和助动词，且“so all”应为“so on”，句子结构不完整且表达不准确。

× Because some people find it troublesome will others don't want to be controlled by list.

✓ Because some people find it troublesome, while others don't want to be controlled by lists.

原句中“will”用错，应为“while”表示转折，且“list”应为复数“lists”，句子结构需要调整。

× I prefer to make a list on my phone.

✓ I prefer to make a list using my phone.

习惯表达是“using my phone”而不是“on my phone”，更符合英语习惯。

× Using phone to take list is more convenient.

✓ Using a phone to make a list is more convenient.

缺少冠词“a”，且“take list”表达不准确，应为“make a list”。

× Not only it is. Portable. But I can also check anytime, everywhere.

✓ Not only is it portable, but I can also check it anytime, anywhere.

原句断句错误，且“portable”前缺少主语和谓语，副词“everywhere”改为“anywhere”更合适。