列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical errors and redundancy. Try to give a clear, direct response with proper sentence structure and avoid unnecessary repetition. Use linking words to connect your ideas logically.

範例: Yes, I always make a shopping list because it helps me remember what I need to buy, especially during winter. For example, I note down the products and brands I prefer to ensure I don't forget anything.

建議: Your answer is confusing and lacks clear structure. Provide a direct response first, then explain your reasoning with linking words. Use complete sentences and avoid fragmented phrases.

範例: No, I don't usually make a list for my work because I focus on one task at a time. Once I finish one job, I move on to the next, so I find a list unnecessary.

建議: Your answer is unclear and lacks coherence. Try to explain reasons clearly using linking words and complete sentences. Avoid vague phrases and provide specific reasons or examples.

範例: Some people dislike making lists because they prefer to do tasks spontaneously, one after another. They rely on their memory and ability to stay focused without needing a written plan.

建議: Your answer is confusing and contains grammatical errors. Provide a clear preference with reasons, using linking words to connect ideas logically. Use complete sentences and avoid unclear phrases.

範例: I prefer to make lists on my phone because I always have it with me, so I won't forget the list. Paper lists can be easily lost, but my phone is more reliable and convenient.

× Yes. Of course I would make a list while I'm shopping becaused.

✓ Yes. Of course I make a list while I'm shopping because.

The use of 'would make' suggests a conditional or habitual past action, but the context is about a current habitual action, so the simple present tense 'make' is appropriate. Also, 'becaused' is incorrect; the correct word is 'because'. Use 'because' to introduce a reason.

× Dig nurseries what I want to buy I forgot so that I make a list.

✓ Sometimes I forget what I want to buy, so I make a list.

The original sentence is unclear and ungrammatical. 'Dig nurseries' is likely a mishearing or typo. The sentence needs to be restructured to clearly express the idea that the speaker forgets what to buy, so they make a list.

× Want to buy winter? When to buy and what product to buy? And which company should buy?

✓ I want to buy winter products. When to buy and what products to buy? And which company should I buy from?

The original sentences are fragments and lack subjects and verbs. Adding subjects and verbs clarifies the meaning. Also, 'which company should buy?' is incomplete; it should be 'which company should I buy from?'

× No I won't make list while I am working becaused they work is only one what I will do.

✓ No, I don't make a list while I am working because the work is the only thing I will do.

'Won't' indicates future refusal, but the context is about habitual action, so 'don't' is correct. 'Becaused' is incorrect; use 'because'. The phrase 'they work is only one what I will do' is ungrammatical and needs correction to 'the work is the only thing I will do'.

× So I will continue my work until I complete then after I will start another work so.

✓ So I continue my work until I complete it, then I start another task.

The original sentence is awkward and uses future tense unnecessarily. Since the context is habitual action, simple present tense is better. Also, 'another work' is better expressed as 'another task' or 'another piece of work'. The sentence needs proper conjunctions and punctuation.

× The works. I want list.

✓ I want a list of the tasks.

'Works' is incorrect here; 'work' is uncountable or 'tasks' is countable plural. Also, 'I want list' lacks an article; it should be 'I want a list'. The sentence needs to be combined for clarity.

× Becauses. They won't like.

✓ Because they don't like it.

'Becauses' is incorrect; use 'because'. 'Won't like' implies future refusal, but the context is about general dislike, so 'don't like' is appropriate.

× At least. And they come, they do works one another, one after another.

✓ At least, they come and do tasks one after another.

The original sentences are fragmented and unclear. Combining them and correcting 'works' to 'tasks' improves clarity and grammar.

× So that's why they won't make a list and they want someone have. Grasping power, and they can remain. All the time.

✓ So that's why they don't make a list and want someone who has good memory and can remember everything all the time.

'Want someone have' is incorrect; it should be 'want someone who has'. 'Grasping power' is unclear; 'good memory' is more natural. 'Remain' is incorrect here; 'remember' is appropriate.

× I prefer the full list of Arby cause the paper I will forgot.

✓ I prefer the full list on my phone because I will forget the paper.

'Arby' is unclear; likely 'on my phone' is intended. 'I will forgot' is incorrect; 'forget' is the base form after 'will'. Also, 'the paper' is better than 'paper' here.

× Here and there, so I'd make I don't make a list on paper, I will make on the phone because I won't forgot the phone now.

✓ I don't make a list on paper because I might lose it here and there, so I make it on the phone because I won't forget my phone now.

The original sentence has misplaced phrases and incorrect prepositions. 'Here and there' should be connected to losing the paper. 'Won't forgot' is incorrect; 'won't forget' is correct. Also, 'make I don't make' is ungrammatical.

× But his phone is becoming very useful, so that's why I want. Prefer paper IP for only four.

✓ My phone is very useful now, so that's why I prefer it over paper lists.

'His phone' is likely a mistake for 'my phone'. 'I want. Prefer paper IP for only four' is unclear and ungrammatical. The corrected sentence clarifies the intended meaning and uses proper modal verb and sentence structure.