列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 你的回答表达了做购物清单的习惯，但句子结构不够自然，且表达不够清晰。建议简化句子结构，避免语法错误，并用更准确的词汇表达目的。

範例: Yes, I usually make a shopping list before I go to the store because it helps me shop more efficiently and avoid forgetting anything.

建議: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清的问题，且内容重复。建议使用更准确的词汇，避免重复，并用连词使句子更连贯。

範例: Absolutely. I believe that having a good schedule improves work efficiency and productivity, which positively influences our overall performance.

建議: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不清晰，且逻辑不连贯。建议简化句子，使用正确的语法，并清楚表达原因。

範例: Some people dislike making lists because they feel restricted by having to follow tasks step by step, which can be stressful for them.

建議: 回答中语法和词汇错误较多，表达不连贯，且有拼写错误。建议使用简单句子，正确表达偏好，并说明原因。

範例: I prefer making lists on my phone because it's more convenient and modern technology makes it easier than using paper.

× Sure, I will make a list before I decide to buy something that will help me clearly to find an efficiency.

✓ Sure, I make a list before I decide to buy something that will help me clearly find efficiency.

这里不需要使用将来时态“will”，因为描述的是习惯性动作，应该用一般现在时。此外，"help me clearly to find an efficiency"中的"to"是不必要的，且"an efficiency"用法不当，应去掉冠词。

× I think a good schedule can help us to improve our works efficiency and productivity.

✓ I think a good schedule can help us improve our work efficiency and productivity.

"works efficiency"中的"works"应为不可数名词"work"，表示工作效率。

× So I think that have some benefit influence to our work.

✓ So I think that it has some beneficial influence on our work.

缺少主语"it"，动词应为第三人称单数"has"，"benefit influence"应改为形容词形式"beneficial influence"，介词应为"on"。

× Maybe I sing some people will feel streak by the. List.

✓ Maybe some people will feel stressed by the list.

"I sing"是错误的，应去掉；"streak"用词错误，应为"stressed"表示感到压力；句末的句点位置错误。

× They don't like this feeling, so they doesn't like the list.

✓ They don't like this feeling, so they don't like the list.

主语"they"对应的助动词应为"don't"，而不是"doesn't"。

× In fact, I prefer the electrical list stamp paper I think in modern societies.

✓ In fact, I prefer electronic lists to paper ones, I think in modern societies.

"electrical list stamp paper"表达不清，应改为"electronic lists"；"prefer"后面应接介词"to"表示偏好比较。

× The technology can help us make a least more convenience than do it in paper are always I think the most of Dunster have the same idea with me.

✓ Technology can help us make lists more convenient than doing them on paper. I think most people have the same idea as me.

"a least"应为"lists"；"more convenience"应为形容词形式"more convenient"；"do it in paper"应改为"doing them on paper"；"are always"无意义，应删除；"the most of Dunster"应为"most people"；"have the same idea with me"应为"have the same idea as me"。