列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical errors which affect naturalness and effectiveness. Try to respond directly with a clear topic sentence, then add specific reasons using linking words. Avoid redundancy and keep sentences concise.

範例: Yes, I usually make a list before shopping because it helps me remember everything I need. Moreover, it saves time and prevents me from buying unnecessary items.

建議: Your answer addresses the question but has grammatical mistakes and some redundancy. Use linking words to connect ideas and provide specific details about how lists help you manage work effectively.

範例: Yes, I often make lists for my work because they help me stay punctual and manage my time efficiently. For example, by listing tasks, I can prioritize and avoid missing deadlines.

建議: Your answer is unclear and contains many grammatical errors. Try to express your ideas more clearly with correct sentence structure. Use linking words to explain reasons and avoid repetition.

範例: Some people dislike making lists because they believe they are punctual and can remember tasks easily. Therefore, they prefer to rely on their memory rather than writing things down.

建議: Your answer has unclear phrases and grammatical mistakes. Try to clearly state your preference and explain reasons using linking words. Avoid vague expressions and ensure coherence.

範例: I prefer making lists on my mobile phone because it is convenient and I can set alarms to remind me of important tasks. Also, unlike paper lists, digital lists are less likely to be lost.

× Yes, I mostly prefer to make a list while going for a shopping because it's a good being and also remembering the what thing we want or not.

✓ Yes, I mostly prefer to make a list while going shopping because it's a good habit and also helps in remembering what things we want or not.

The phrase 'going for a shopping' is incorrect; the correct form is 'going shopping' without 'for'. Also, 'being' is incorrect here; the intended word is likely 'habit'. The phrase 'remembering the what thing we want or not' is ungrammatical; it should be 'helps in remembering what things we want or not'. This correction improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× So according to me it's very important to make a list before going to shopping.

✓ So according to me, it's very important to make a list before going shopping.

The phrase 'going to shopping' is incorrect; 'shopping' is a gerund and does not require 'to' after 'going'. The correct phrase is 'going shopping'. Also, a comma after 'according to me' improves readability.

× It's easy for individual and also it it's easy so that individual can't forget anything they want that is necessity for her.

✓ It's easy for an individual and also helps so that the individual can't forget anything they want that is necessary for them.

The word 'individual' needs an article 'an' before it. The phrase 'it it's easy' is redundant and incorrect; it should be simplified. 'Necessity for her' is incorrect; 'necessary for them' is more appropriate and gender-neutral. Also, 'can't forget anything they want' is better phrased as 'can't forget anything they need' or 'that is necessary'.

× Yes, I mostly prefer to make a list for my work because it helps me to do my work in a punctuality and also help me to keep time from a hectic schedule for all of my work.

✓ Yes, I mostly prefer to make a list for my work because it helps me to do my work punctually and also helps me to manage time within a hectic schedule for all of my work.

The phrase 'in a punctuality' is incorrect; 'punctuality' is a noun and should be replaced with the adverb 'punctually'. Also, 'help me to keep time from a hectic schedule' is awkward; 'helps me to manage time within a hectic schedule' is clearer and grammatically correct. Subject-verb agreement is corrected by changing 'help' to 'helps'.

× Many of individuals don't like to prepare released because they think that they are already punctual in their work and they remember the things easily.

✓ Many individuals don't like to prepare lists because they think that they are already punctual in their work and they remember things easily.

The phrase 'Many of individuals' is incorrect; it should be 'Many individuals'. The word 'released' is incorrect in this context; the intended word is 'lists'. 'Remember the things' should be 'remember things' for natural phrasing.

× So I think should I don't prefer to make a list, so that's why they just do one that they do.

✓ So I think they don't prefer to make a list, so that's why they just do what they do.

The original sentence is confusing and ungrammatical. 'I think should I don't prefer' is incorrect; it should be 'I think they don't prefer'. 'Do one that they do' is unclear; 'do what they do' is clearer and grammatically correct.

× They do the things by their own cells, so they not prepared list.

✓ They do things on their own, so they do not prepare a list.

The phrase 'by their own cells' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'on their own'. 'They not prepared list' is ungrammatical; it should be 'they do not prepare a list'. Also, the article 'a' is needed before 'list'.

× Well, I mostly prefer to make a list on my mobile phone because it's a VZV and also an individual came to know about with the help of alarm that what time, what hours they have to be do or they don't do.

✓ Well, I mostly prefer to make a list on my mobile phone because it's very convenient and also an individual can know with the help of an alarm what time or hours they have to do or not do something.

The phrase 'it's a VZV' is unclear and likely a typo; replaced with 'very convenient'. 'An individual came to know about with the help of alarm' is ungrammatical; corrected to 'an individual can know with the help of an alarm'. 'They have to be do or they don't do' is incorrect; corrected to 'they have to do or not do something'.

× So it's easy way to use mobile phone for preparing Alice because somehow paper may be lost.

✓ So it's an easy way to use a mobile phone for preparing a list because paper may get lost somehow.

The phrase 'easy way' needs the article 'an' before it. 'Mobile phone' needs the article 'a'. 'Preparing Alice' is incorrect; the intended word is 'list'. 'Paper may be lost' is better phrased as 'paper may get lost' for naturalness.