列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is unclear and contains many grammatical errors. Try to make a clear topic sentence directly answering the question, then add specific reasons using simple linking words like 'because' or 'so'. Avoid redundancy and incomplete sentences.

範例: Yes, I usually make a list when I go shopping because it helps me remember everything I need. For example, without a list, I often forget important items at the store.

建議: Your answer repeats phrases and is incomplete. Start with a clear topic sentence, then explain why making a list helps you, using linking words like 'because' or 'so'. Use correct grammar and complete sentences.

範例: Yes, I make a list for my work because it helps me stay focused and not forget important tasks. This way, I can complete my work more efficiently.

建議: Your answer is unclear and has grammar mistakes. Try to express your opinion clearly with reasons. Use linking words like 'because' and avoid vague phrases. Provide specific reasons why some people dislike making lists.

範例: I think some people don't like making lists because they find it time-consuming and prefer to remember things by themselves.

建議: Your answer is confusing and has many incomplete sentences. Give a clear preference with reasons, using linking words like 'because' or 'so'. Use complete sentences and avoid redundancy.

範例: I prefer to make a list on my phone because it is easy to add or remove items. For example, I can quickly check my list while shopping without carrying paper.

× Yes, I usually make all used when I'm going for a sopping.

✓ Yes, I usually make a list when I'm going shopping.

The phrase 'make all used' is incorrect and unclear. The correct expression is 'make a list'. Also, 'sopping' is a misspelling of 'shopping'. The verb 'going' should be followed by the gerund form 'shopping' to indicate the activity.

× It is very important to write or least be 'cause when I'm in a solve I forgot everything what I need to know what I need and.

✓ It is very important to write a list because when I'm in a store, I forget everything I need to know.

The phrase 'or least be' is incorrect; it should be 'a list'. 'In a solve' is incorrect; it should be 'in a store'. The sentence structure is confusing and needs to be simplified for clarity.

× Yes, I made a list for my org because it is very important to make a list because it is because it helps me stay focused and don't forgot the one I.

✓ Yes, I make a list for my work because it is very important; it helps me stay focused and not forget the things I need.

The verb 'made' is past tense but the context suggests a habitual action, so present tense 'make' is appropriate. 'Org' is unclear and likely a typo for 'work'. 'Don't forgot' is incorrect; it should be 'not forget'.

× I think many people don't like making a list because people think it is always tough time and use a brain thier own.

✓ I think many people don't like making lists because they think it always takes a lot of time and they have to use their own brain.

The pronouns 'people' and 'thier' are misused or misspelled. 'Thier' should be 'their'. The sentence structure is awkward and needs correction for clarity and proper pronoun use.

× A preferred to make a list in my phone because it is very easy an understanding all items when I'm buying an.

✓ I prefer to make a list on my phone because it is very easy to understand all items when I'm buying.

The preposition 'in' is incorrect; 'on my phone' is the correct phrase. 'An understanding' is incorrect; it should be 'to understand'. The sentence needs correction for proper preposition and infinitive verb form.

× It is very easy when I'm up, for example when I. Road in. Phone it is very easy.

✓ It is very easy when I'm out; for example, when I use my phone, it is very easy.

The sentence is fragmented and unclear. 'Road in' is incorrect; likely intended 'use my phone'. The sentence needs restructuring for clarity and correct verb usage.