列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Try to make your answer more concise and natural by avoiding redundancy and grammatical errors. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly and keep your sentences clear and direct.

範例: Yes, I always make a list when I shop because my memory isn't very reliable. For groceries, I usually write the list on my phone to keep it handy.

建議: Focus on structuring your answer with a clear topic sentence and supporting details. Use linking words to improve coherence and correct grammar to sound more natural.

範例: Yes, I definitely make lists for work because my memory isn't very reliable. Since I am a nail technician and often have three or four appointments in one day, writing them down helps me stay organized.

建議: Avoid repeating ideas and improve grammar. Use linking words to connect your reasons clearly and provide a more natural response.

範例: Some people might not like making lists because they believe their memory is sharp enough to remember everything, so they feel lists are unnecessary.

建議: Work on clarity and grammar. Use linking words to explain your preference clearly and avoid filler words to make your answer more natural and effective.

範例: I prefer making lists on my phone because it is easy to carry and less likely to get lost compared to paper. Therefore, I usually use the notes app to keep track of my lists.

× I make listings for shopping because my memory is not that much sharp.

✓ I make lists for shopping because my memory is not that sharp.

The word 'listings' is incorrect here; the correct noun is 'lists'. Also, 'that much sharp' is ungrammatical; it should be 'that sharp'. The verb 'make' is correctly used with the noun 'lists'.

× So definitely I have to make the list is for shopping for groceries and sometimes I make notes in my phone.

✓ So definitely I have to make a list for shopping for groceries, and sometimes I make notes on my phone.

The original sentence has an unnecessary 'is' and awkward phrasing. 'Make the list is for shopping' is incorrect; it should be 'make a list for shopping'. Also, 'in my phone' should be 'on my phone' as notes are made on the device, not inside it.

× Yes definitely I make list.

✓ Yes, definitely I make lists.

The noun 'list' should be plural 'lists' because the context implies multiple lists are made. Also, a comma after 'Yes' improves clarity.

× Like I am a nail technician so sometime I got 3 or 4 appointments at a one day so I have to write down appointment.

✓ I am a nail technician, so sometimes I have 3 or 4 appointments in one day, so I have to write down the appointments.

The sentence has multiple issues: 'sometime' should be 'sometimes'; 'got' should be 'have' to match present tense; 'at a one day' should be 'in one day'; 'write down appointment' should be 'write down the appointments' to be grammatically correct and plural.

× Maybe they think they have a sharp memories than others, that's why they don't like to make list.

✓ Maybe they think they have sharper memories than others, that's why they don't like to make lists.

'A sharp memories' is incorrect because 'memories' is plural and cannot be preceded by 'a'. It should be 'sharper memories' to indicate comparison. Also, 'make list' should be 'make lists' to be plural and consistent.

× I prefer to make a list on my phone becauses becaused mobile phone is a easy to carry and uh sometime like paper blow off phone does does not so.

✓ I prefer to make a list on my phone because a mobile phone is easy to carry, and sometimes paper can blow away but the phone does not.

The sentence has spelling errors ('becauses becaused'), article misuse ('a easy' should be 'easy' or 'an easy'), and awkward phrasing. 'Paper blow off' is incorrect; it should be 'paper can blow away'. Also, 'phone does does not so' is ungrammatical and corrected to 'phone does not'.

× So my point of view I think I am the one who making notes and list on my phone in my notes.

✓ So, in my point of view, I think I am the one who makes notes and lists on my phone in my notes app.

The phrase 'who making' is incorrect; it should be 'who makes' to agree with the subject. Also, 'list' should be plural 'lists'. Adding commas improves clarity, and specifying 'notes app' clarifies the meaning.