列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains some grammatical errors. Try to respond directly to the question with a clear topic sentence, then add specific details using linking words. Avoid redundancy and keep your answer concise within 5 sentences.

範例: Yes, I usually make a shopping list on my phone using the Notes app. This helps me remember everything I need and saves time. For example, last week I bought all the ingredients for a recipe without forgetting anything.

建議: Your answer addresses the question but has some repetition and unclear phrases. Use linking words to connect ideas and be more specific about how the list helps your work. Also, correct grammar and avoid redundancy.

範例: Yes, I always make a to-do list before the day starts. It helps me stay organized and improves my productivity because I can prioritize tasks effectively. For instance, I completed all my assignments on time last week thanks to my list.

建議: Your answer is unclear and contains many grammatical mistakes. Try to give a clear opinion with specific reasons, use linking words, and avoid hesitation sounds like 'uh'. Keep your answer concise and coherent.

範例: Some people dislike making lists because they prefer to remember things mentally. Additionally, they might find lists unnecessary or time-consuming. However, this can sometimes lead to forgetting important tasks.

建議: Your answer repeats ideas and has unclear sentences. Try to give a clear preference with reasons, use linking words to connect your points, and avoid redundancy. Keep your answer within 5 sentences.

範例: I prefer making lists on my phone using the Notes app because it is convenient and easy to access. Also, I often lose paper lists, so digital notes work better for me. For example, I can quickly add or delete items anytime on my phone.

× Value really I prefer to make list whenever I am shopping as I have a one app in my on my phone named notes.

✓ Actually, I really prefer to make a list whenever I am shopping because I have an app on my phone named Notes.

The original sentence has incorrect word order and missing articles. 'Value really' is unclear and misplaced. 'a one app' should be 'an app' and 'in my on my phone' is redundant and incorrect preposition use. The corrected sentence improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× I usually make A to do list in my.

✓ I usually make a to-do list on it.

The original sentence is incomplete and uses incorrect article capitalization. 'A to do list' should be 'a to-do list' and the phrase 'in my' is incomplete; it should specify the device or app. The correction completes the sentence and uses proper article and preposition.

× I usually make a list for my work, especially A to do list before A1 before a day.

✓ I usually make a list for my work, especially a to-do list the day before.

The original sentence incorrectly capitalizes 'A' and includes unclear phrase 'A1 before a day'. The correction uses lowercase 'a' and clarifies the timing as 'the day before' for better understanding.

× And it helps me to improve my productivity and my efficiency to to do the do any work.

✓ It helps me improve my productivity and efficiency to do any work.

The original sentence has redundant words ('to to do the do') and awkward phrasing. The correction removes redundancy and simplifies the sentence for clarity.

× I think some people have short memories and they can keep things in their mind and. Uh, do the shopping and without making any discs and everything and.

✓ I think some people have short memories and cannot keep things in their mind, so they do the shopping without making any lists or notes.

The original sentence is fragmented and contains unclear words like 'discs'. The correction completes the sentence, replaces 'discs' with 'lists or notes', and improves coherence.

× I think that's the reason, that's why people why to make this.

✓ I think that's the reason why people don't like to make lists.

The original sentence is unclear and incomplete. The correction clarifies the intended meaning and corrects the structure.

× As I told before, I do have one app in my phone. Mobile phone and named nodes are usually preferred to make notes on that and it helps me.

✓ As I said before, I have an app on my mobile phone named Notes, and I usually prefer to make notes on it because it helps me.

The original sentence has article errors ('one app' should be 'an app'), awkward phrasing, and incorrect app name capitalization ('nodes' should be 'Notes'). The correction fixes these issues and improves sentence flow.

× It helps me too. It's ready to. Use an easy to use for me as it helps me to. Actually I'm very bad with the paper thing.

✓ It helps me too. It's ready to use and easy for me because I'm actually very bad with paper.

The original sentence is fragmented and contains incomplete phrases. The correction combines the ideas into coherent sentences and corrects awkward expressions.