列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Apni answer e kichu grammar error ache, ar kichu sentence redundant. Apni chesta korun simple ar clear sentence use korte, ar unnecessary words komate. For example, 'I make a list because it helps me remember what to buy.'

範例: Yes, I always make a list when I go shopping because it helps me remember everything I need to buy and saves time.

建議: Apnar answer e kichu grammar ar word choice error ache. Apni chesta korun clear ar logical sentence banate, linking words use kore. For example, 'Yes, I make lists for my work because they help me stay organized and complete tasks efficiently.'

範例: Yes, I make lists for my work because they help me stay organized and complete my tasks efficiently.

建議: Apnar answer e sentence structure khub confused ar unclear. Apni chesta korun simple ar direct sentence use korte, ar opinion clear bhabe express korte. For example, 'Some people don't like making lists because they prefer to work spontaneously.'

範例: Some people don't like making lists because they prefer to work spontaneously and find lists restrictive.

建議: Apnar answer bhalo, kintu kichu grammar ar linking word improve kora dorkar. Apni chesta korun 'but' er jaygay 'however' ba 'while' use korte, ar sentence gulo ke aro smooth korte. For example, 'I prefer paper lists for shopping, but I use my phone for travel plans.'

範例: I prefer making lists on paper when I go shopping; however, I use my phone to make lists when I travel or work.

× I make a list because this is a very much helpful for me.

✓ I make a list because this is very helpful for me.

The phrase 'very much helpful' is incorrect; 'helpful' is an adjective and should be modified by 'very' without 'much'. In English, 'very' is used to intensify adjectives, while 'much' is used with uncountable nouns or verbs. So, 'very helpful' is correct.

× So I when I go outside for buying something, I make a list for give me some extra service.

✓ So when I go outside to buy something, I make a list to give me some extra service.

The phrase 'for buying' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'to' before the verb in base form to express purpose. Also, 'for give' should be 'to give' to indicate purpose. So, 'to buy' and 'to give' are correct.

× It much helpful and organized for me.

✓ It is very helpful and organized for me.

The sentence lacks the verb 'is' and uses 'much helpful' incorrectly. 'Helpful' is an adjective and should be modified by 'very' not 'much'. Also, the verb 'is' is necessary for correct sentence structure.

× And I think this is working because the list is very much important for doing some workers.

✓ And I think this is working because the list is very important for doing some work.

The phrase 'very much important' is incorrect; 'important' is an adjective and should be modified by 'very' without 'much'. Also, 'for doing some workers' is incorrect; 'workers' is a noun meaning people, but the intended meaning is 'work' (tasks). So, 'for doing some work' is correct.

× Actually it depends on uh, some people for because it's their personal charge when they do something in some people like to making list, but on the other hand many people are not like.

✓ Actually, it depends on some people because it's their personal choice when they do something. Some people like making lists, but on the other hand, many people do not like it.

The phrase 'depends on uh, some people for because' is incorrect; 'depends on some people because' is correct. 'Personal charge' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'personal choice'. 'Like to making list' is incorrect; it should be 'like making lists'. Also, 'many people are not like' is incomplete; it should be 'many people do not like it'.

× Actually it depends sometimes because when I go outside for buying something I'm making a list in paper and but when I go to travel or do some work I'm making a list in my phone.

✓ Actually, it depends sometimes because when I go outside to buy something, I make a list on paper, but when I go to travel or do some work, I make a list on my phone.

The phrase 'for buying' should be 'to buy' to express purpose. 'I'm making a list in paper' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'on paper'. Similarly, 'making a list in my phone' should be 'on my phone'. Also, 'and but' is redundant; only 'but' is needed.