列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 你的回答有些语法错误，且表达不够自然。建议使用完整句子，避免重复和断句不连贯的问题。同时，回答时可以更具体地说明为什么不喜欢列购物清单。

範例: I usually don't make a list when I shop because I prefer to remember the items I need. This way, I can shop quickly without spending extra time writing a list.

建議: 回答中有语法错误和重复词汇，表达不够清晰。建议直接回答问题，并用连词连接观点，说明自己不做清单的原因和朋友做清单的效果。

範例: I don't usually make a list for my work because I try to finish quizzes and essays quickly. However, I know my friend makes lists and gets high grades, so I think making lists can be effective.

建議: 回答结构不够清晰，语法错误较多。建议先给出主题句，然后用具体原因支持，并使用连接词使表达更连贯。

範例: Some people, like me, don't like making lists because it takes too much time to write everything down. As a result, they have less time to complete their actual tasks.

建議: 回答不完整且表达不清晰。建议用完整句子说明偏好，并具体说明手机列清单的优点，避免断句和不连贯。

範例: I prefer to make lists on my phone because I use it more often than paper. Also, phone apps are more convenient and help me organize my tasks better.

× I do not make list when I shop.

✓ I do not make a list when I shop.

这里缺少冠词“a”，因为“list”是可数名词，单数形式前需要加冠词。

× I think make a list is a waste of the time.

✓ I think making a list is a waste of time.

“make a list”应改为动名词短语“making a list”作主语；“the time”应改为“time”，表示泛指时间，不需要定冠词。

× I do not make a list for my work, why? Work for my quiz or essay.

✓ I do not make a list for my work, why? Work for my quizzes or essays.

“quiz”和“essay”应使用复数形式“quizzes”和“essays”，因为这里指的是多次测验或多篇文章。

× I will do do them quickly as I can.

✓ I will do them as quickly as I can.

“do do”是重复错误，应去掉一个“do”；“quickly”应放在“as”后形成固定结构“as quickly as”。

× my friends always make a list and she always gets gets high grades.

✓ My friend always makes a list and she always gets high grades.

“friends”应改为单数“friend”与后文“she”保持一致；“gets gets”重复，应去掉一个“gets”；“makes”第三人称单数形式。

× I will take myself as an example first making this is a waste of time when I need to make a list, I will spend a lot of time to write what I should do.

✓ I will take myself as an example. First, making a list is a waste of time. When I need to make a list, I will spend a lot of time writing what I should do.

原句结构混乱，应拆分为多个句子；“making this is a waste of time”应改为“making a list is a waste of time”；“spend a lot of time to write”应改为“spend a lot of time writing”，动词后接动名词。

× Therefore, I will have less of time to do my homework or essay.

✓ Therefore, I will have less time to do my homework or essays.

“less of time”应改为“less time”；“essay”应改为复数“essays”，与“homework”并列。

× The reason why I prefer to make list on my phone.

✓ The reason why I prefer to make a list on my phone.

“list”是可数名词，单数形式前需要加冠词“a”。

× The reason why I prefer to make list on my phone. As follows.

✓ The reason why I prefer to make a list on my phone is as follows.

原句断句错误，应合并为完整句子，主语和谓语缺失。

× First, I think. I use phones. I spend time on using phones. More than using paper.

✓ First, I think I use my phone and spend more time using it than using paper.

原句断句不当，应合并为完整句子；“phones”应为单数“phone”；“spend time on using phones”表达不自然，应改为“spend more time using it”。

× Second, I think. Feng is more useful to.

✓ Second, I think Feng is more useful too.

“to”应为“too”，表示“也”；句子断句错误，应合并为完整句子。