列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 你的回答有些语法错误，且表达不够自然。建议注意冠词的使用（如a list），避免句子碎片（如单词“Quickly”单独成句），并且用连词使句子更连贯。

範例: I don't usually make a list when I go shopping because I can remember the items I need. This helps me shop quickly and efficiently. Also, I feel that making a list wastes time that I could spend shopping.

建議: 回答中有重复词汇和语法错误，表达不够清晰。建议直接回答问题，使用完整句子，并用连接词使逻辑更清楚。

範例: I don't usually make a list for my work, such as quizzes or essays, because I try to finish them quickly. However, I have noticed that my friend who makes lists often gets high grades, so I think making lists can be effective.

建議: 句子结构混乱，表达不够清晰。建议先给出主题句，然后用具体细节支持，并使用连接词使句子流畅。

範例: Some people, including me, don't like making lists because it takes too much time to write everything down. As a result, they have less time to complete their actual tasks like homework or essays.

建議: 回答不完整且表达不连贯。建议用完整句子表达观点，避免断句，清楚说明理由，并使用连接词。

範例: I prefer to make lists on my phone because I use it more often than paper. Also, phone apps are more convenient and useful for organizing my tasks.

× I do not make list when I shop.

✓ I do not make a list when I shop.

这里缺少冠词'a'，因为'list'是可数名词，单数形式前需要加冠词。

× I think make a list is a waste of the time.

✓ I think making a list is a waste of time.

'make a list'应改为动名词短语'making a list'作主语，且'the time'应改为'time'，表示泛指时间。

× I do not make a list for my work, why? Work for my quiz or essay.

✓ I do not make a list for my work, why? Work for my quizzes or essays.

'quiz'和'essay'应使用复数形式，因为这里指多个测验和作文。

× I will do do them quickly as I can.

✓ I will do them as quickly as I can.

重复了'do'，且比较结构应为'as quickly as'，表示尽可能快地完成。

× my friends always make a list and she always gets gets high grades.

✓ My friends always make lists and they always get high grades.

'friends'是复数，代词应为'they'，'list'应为复数'lists'，且'gets'重复，应改为'get'。

× I will take myself as an example first making this is a waste of time when I need to make a list, I will spend a lot of time to write what I should do.

✓ I will take myself as an example first. Making a list is a waste of time because when I need to make a list, I spend a lot of time writing what I should do.

句子结构混乱，'making this is a waste of time'应分开，且'write'应改为动名词'writing'。

× I will have less of time to do my homework or essay.

✓ I will have less time to do my homework or essays.

'less of time'应改为'less time'，'essay'应改为复数'essays'。

× The reason why I prefer to make list on my phone.

✓ The reason why I prefer to make a list on my phone.

'list'是可数名词，单数前需要冠词'a'。

× As follows.

✓ Here are the reasons.

'As follows'通常用在列举前，单独使用不完整，应补充完整句子。

× First, I think. I use phones. I spend time on using phones. More than using paper.

✓ First, I think I use my phone and spend more time using it than using paper.

原句断断续续，缺少连贯性，应合并成完整句子。

× Second, I think. Feng is more useful to.

✓ Second, I think using the phone is more useful too.

句子不完整且拼写错误，应改为完整表达。