列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is understandable but can be improved by making it more concise and clear. Avoid redundancy and grammatical errors. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly. For example, start with a clear topic sentence, then explain why you make a list, and finish with a concluding remark.

範例: Yes, I usually make a list when I shop because it helps me remember all the items I need. Since I often have many things to buy, the list keeps me organized and saves time.

建議: Your answer is quite repetitive and unclear. Try to structure your response with a clear topic sentence and supporting details. Use linking words like 'because' or 'so' properly to connect ideas. Also, avoid filler words and focus on clarity.

範例: Yes, I make lists for my work, especially when I have many tasks related to my studies. This helps me remember what to do next, and it works well to keep me organized.

建議: Your answer is relevant but can be improved by avoiding repetition and making sentences more natural. Use linking words like 'because' and vary your vocabulary to make your answer more engaging.

範例: In my opinion, some people dislike making lists because they have a good memory and are well organized, so they don't feel the need to write things down.

建議: Your answer has good ideas but needs clearer expression and better grammar. Avoid awkward phrases like 'people can be lossed anywhere'. Use linking words to connect your points logically.

範例: I prefer to make lists on my phone because it is more convenient than paper. Since I carry my phone everywhere, I can easily check my list anytime without worrying about losing it.

× Yes, most of the time I prefer to make a list for a for my shopping be 'cause if I have to show a lot of things so it is difficult for me to remember all the items, in that case I make the list.

✓ Yes, most of the time I prefer to make a list for my shopping because if I have to buy a lot of things, it is difficult for me to remember all the items; in that case, I make the list.

The phrase 'be 'cause' is an incorrect form of 'because'. Also, 'show a lot of things' is incorrect; the intended meaning is 'buy a lot of things'. The sentence structure is improved by removing redundant words and correcting verb usage to present participle form 'buying' implied as 'to buy'.

× Yes, of course, whenever I have to do some work related to my studies, moreover some other works which I couldn't remember because I am because whenever I'm busy in other stuff.

✓ Yes, of course, whenever I have to do some work related to my studies or other tasks which I can't remember because I am busy with other things.

The sentence has redundant and confusing pronoun use and conjunctions. 'Moreover some other works which I couldn't remember because I am because whenever I'm busy in other stuff' is unclear. It is corrected to use proper pronouns and conjunctions for clarity and grammatical correctness.

× So in that case I make the list for my work that I have to do another work after that in that case I make do list.

✓ So in that case, I make a list for my work that I have to do; after that, I make a to-do list.

The phrase 'make do list' is incorrect; it should be 'make a to-do list'. Also, the sentence structure is improved by adding punctuation and correcting pronoun use for clarity.

× Yes, it works also.

✓ Yes, it works as well.

The phrase 'works also' is less natural; 'works as well' is more appropriate in this context.

× In my opinion, people do not like to make the list because they have good memory and they are good at remembering the things and they are well organized so that in that case they do not like to make the list.

✓ In my opinion, people do not like to make lists because they have good memories, are good at remembering things, and are well organized; so in that case, they do not like to make lists.

The phrase 'make the list' is incorrect when referring to lists in general; it should be 'make lists'. Also, 'good memory' should be plural 'good memories' to match the plural subject 'people'.

× Now it either I like to make a list on my phone because it is more convenient as compared to paper and people can be lossed anywhere.

✓ Now, I either like to make a list on my phone because it is more convenient compared to paper, and people can lose paper anywhere.

The phrase 'people can be lossed anywhere' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'people can lose paper anywhere'. Also, 'as compared to' is simplified to 'compared to' for natural usage.

× But I carry my phone everywhere so it is easy for me to look out after my phone and look the list in the mobile phone.

✓ But I carry my phone everywhere, so it is easy for me to look after my phone and check the list on my mobile phone.

The phrase 'look out after my phone' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'look after my phone'. Also, 'look the list' should be 'check the list'. The preposition 'on' is used with 'mobile phone' for correctness.