列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is unclear and lacks coherence. Try to give a clear topic sentence directly answering the question, then add specific reasons using linking words. Avoid incomplete sentences and redundancy. For example, explain why you make a list and how it helps you.

範例: Yes, I always make a shopping list because I tend to forget what to buy. This helps me avoid purchasing unnecessary items and saves time when I shop.

建議: Your answer is confusing and contains unclear phrases. Focus on giving a clear topic sentence and explain how making a list helps your work. Use linking words to connect ideas logically and avoid irrelevant or unclear words.

範例: Yes, I make a list for my work because it helps me manage my time efficiently. By organizing tasks, I can complete my work more effectively.

建議: Your answer is fragmented and unclear. Try to give a complete sentence explaining why some people dislike making lists, then add contrasting opinions with linking words. Use specific reasons and avoid incomplete thoughts.

範例: I think some people find making lists troublesome because it takes extra time. However, others believe lists help them stay organized and work well.

建議: Your answer is unclear and incomplete. Provide a clear preference with reasons, using linking words to explain why you prefer one method over the other. Avoid incomplete sentences and irrelevant words.

範例: I prefer to make lists on my phone because it is more convenient and lightweight. Also, I can update my list quickly whenever I need to.

× Yes, I like miracle list because I always forget where I should buy and sometimes I.

✓ Yes, I like making a list because I always forget what I should buy sometimes.

The phrase 'miracle list' is unclear and likely a mishearing or typo; 'making a list' fits the context. Also, 'where I should buy' is incorrect; it should be 'what I should buy' because you buy things, not places. The singular/plural issue is with 'list' which should be singular here as 'a list'.

× Before I buy. Not not necessary thing, so I always make a list too. By prepare things.

✓ Before I buy unnecessary things, so I always make a list to prepare things.

The phrase 'Not not necessary thing' is incorrect; it should be 'unnecessary things'. Also, 'By prepare things' is incorrect; it should be 'to prepare things'. The preposition 'by' is wrongly used here; 'to' is appropriate for expressing purpose.

× Yes, I was mad girl list for my work because it is good for me to use time.

✓ Yes, I made a good list for my work because it is good for me to use my time.

'was mad girl list' is incorrect; it should be 'made a good list'. The verb 'made' is the past tense of 'make'. Also, 'use time' should be 'use my time' for clarity.

× And again. Act Frick severity so I always make a list to do my job to my walk.

✓ And again, it helps me work efficiently, so I always make a list to do my job well.

The phrase 'Act Frick severity' is unclear and likely a mishearing; 'helps me work efficiently' fits the context. 'to my walk' is incorrect; it should be 'to do my job well'. The adjective/adverb usage is incorrect here.

× Well, I think it because. Troublesome. Oh my. Some of my. Francis is troublesome to make a list, but some people says it is good too.

✓ Well, I think it is because it is troublesome. Some of my friends find it troublesome to make a list, but some people say it is good too.

'Francis' is a mishearing of 'friends'. Also, 'some people says' should be 'some people say' to agree with plural subject. Pronouns and subject-verb agreement need correction.

× Do walk well.

✓ They work well.

'Do walk well' is incorrect and unclear. The intended meaning is likely 'They work well'. Pronoun and verb usage corrected.

× Well, I think it depends on the person, but I think there. My phone is better because it is a little light than.

✓ Well, I think it depends on the person, but I think my phone is better because it is a little lighter.

'There. My phone is better' is incorrect; 'there' is unnecessary. 'a little light than' is incorrect; it should be 'a little lighter'. The comparative adjective 'lighter' is needed here.

× As soon as possible and I want to top. Only just after an my. List.

✓ I want to add items to my list as soon as possible.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. The corrected sentence conveys the intended meaning with proper sentence structure.

× So I think the my phone is.

✓ So I think my phone is better.

'the my phone' is incorrect; it should be 'my phone'. The definite article 'the' should not be used with possessive pronouns like 'my'.