列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to make your response more natural and concise by directly answering the question and providing clear reasons or examples. Avoid redundancy and ensure your sentences are grammatically correct.

範例: Yes, I usually make a shopping list to help me remember what I need. However, sometimes I forget to prepare one when I need something urgently, especially if I'm not at home.

建議: Your answer is confusing and lacks clarity. Focus on directly answering the question with a clear topic sentence, then support it with specific details. Use linking words to connect your ideas logically.

範例: I usually don't make lists for my work, but I understand that having a routine and being disciplined helps achieve success. Making lists can be an effective way to stay organized.

建議: Your response is difficult to understand due to grammatical mistakes and unclear phrasing. Try to express your ideas more clearly and use specific reasons to explain why some people dislike making lists.

範例: Some people dislike making lists because they prefer a more flexible lifestyle and find strict routines restrictive. They might feel that lists limit their freedom to manage tasks spontaneously.

建議: Your answer has good ideas but is unclear and contains errors. Make your sentences more natural and concise, and explain your preference clearly with specific reasons. Use linking words to improve coherence.

範例: I prefer making lists on my phone because it's convenient and easy to update. I can add or remove items anytime, which makes managing my tasks more efficient.

× I make list when I shop, but sometimes I forget to make a list when I feel need of anything.

✓ I make a list when I shop, but sometimes I forget to make a list when I feel the need for anything.

The noun 'list' is countable and singular here, so it requires the article 'a'. Also, 'feel need of anything' is incorrect; it should be 'feel the need for anything' to properly express necessity.

× When I'm in somehow feels like in my class in outside my room point listing is not possible in that time.

✓ Sometimes, when I am in my classroom or outside my room, making a list is not possible at that time.

The original sentence is confusing and lacks proper structure. It needs to be rephrased for clarity and grammatical correctness, including subject-verb agreement and proper prepositions.

× Normally I don't make list for my work, but I know listing for work or in other words we can say routine work.

✓ Normally, I don't make lists for my work, but I know that listing work, or in other words, routine work, is important.

'List' should be plural 'lists' because it refers to multiple instances. Also, the sentence needs slight restructuring for clarity.

× Disciplined work is very much effective in case of success and it's work.

✓ Disciplined work is very effective for success, and it works.

The phrase 'very much effective' is incorrect; 'very effective' is correct. Also, 'it's work' is unclear and should be 'it works' to indicate effectiveness.

× Katie Will.

✓ It will work.

The phrase 'Katie Will' is unclear and seems to be a mishearing or typo. The correct modal verb phrase to express future certainty is 'It will work.'

× Normally people were disciplined like making list but not people who are not like our routine or discipline life don't like this to listing any work.

✓ Normally, disciplined people like making lists, but people who do not like routine or disciplined life do not like listing any work.

'People were disciplined like making list' is incorrect; it should be 'disciplined people like making lists'. Also, 'listing any work' is better phrased as 'making lists of any work' or 'listing work'.

× In that case if they least they have to do any work within that time that is no where.

✓ In that case, if they have to do any work within that time, it is difficult.

The original sentence is unclear and grammatically incorrect. It needs restructuring to convey the intended meaning clearly.

× Normally I prefer make listing on my phone because in this era of technology listing in my phone is very handy process because we can update it several time and we also can add or remove decrees.

✓ Normally, I prefer making lists on my phone because, in this era of technology, listing on my phone is a very handy process since we can update it several times and also add or remove items.

The verb 'prefer' should be followed by the gerund form 'making'. 'Listing in my phone' should be 'listing on my phone'. 'Several time' should be 'several times'. 'Remove decrees' is likely a mishearing and should be 'remove items' or 'entries'.

× Any word or any item for?

✓ Any word or any item?

The phrase 'for?' at the end is unnecessary and incorrect here. The sentence should end after 'item' to be grammatically correct.