列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains some grammatical errors and incomplete thoughts. Try to make your sentences complete and clear, avoid redundancy, and use linking words to connect your ideas logically. Also, keep your answer concise and natural, avoiding filler words or unclear phrases.

範例: Yes, I usually make a shopping list to remember what I need and stay organized. This helps me avoid wasting time and spending extra money on unnecessary items.

建議: Your answer addresses the question but has grammatical mistakes and awkward phrasing. Use complete sentences and linking words to improve clarity and coherence. Also, be more specific about how the checklist helps you manage your tasks.

範例: Yes, I make a checklist for my work every day. If I can't finish some tasks, I move them to the next day and write them down to make sure I don't forget anything.

建議: Your answer is confusing and contains grammatical errors. Try to clearly explain your idea in complete sentences. Use linking words to connect your points and provide specific reasons why some people might dislike making lists.

範例: Some people don't like making lists because they find it time-consuming or prefer to remember things mentally. Others may feel that lists limit their flexibility or creativity.

建議: Your answer is understandable but has grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. Use correct verb forms and clearer expressions. Also, explain why you prefer your phone over paper with specific reasons.

範例: I prefer to make lists on my phone because it's easier to edit and add more items whenever I need to, compared to using paper.

× Yes, I make a, I make a list check to remember what I need and to keep me organized. And folks. Anne to drop. Wasting the time and wasting more money.

✓ Yes, I make a checklist to remember what I need and to keep myself organized, and to avoid wasting time and money.

The original sentence has fragmented and unclear phrases that disrupt the sentence structure. Combining the ideas into a clear, complete sentence improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× Yes I make checklist of my things.

✓ Yes, I make a checklist of my things.

The noun 'checklist' is countable and singular, so it requires the indefinite article 'a' before it.

× I will do it in my day and I moved some things to the next day.

✓ I do it during my day and move some things to the next day.

The sentence mixes future tense 'will do' with past tense 'moved' incorrectly. Using present tense 'do' and 'move' fits better with the habitual action described.

× So I write it on my checklist to don't for get it.

✓ So I write it on my checklist so I don't forget it.

The phrase 'to don't forget' is incorrect; 'so I don't forget' correctly expresses purpose and negation. Also, 'for get' should be 'forget' as one word.

× Because some people have more things and their brain so there make a checklist to don't forget anything and stay focus.

✓ Because some people have many things on their mind, so they make a checklist to not forget anything and stay focused.

The original sentence misuses 'their brain' and 'there make'. 'Their mind' is more appropriate, and 'they make' is the correct subject-verb agreement. Also, 'to don't forget' should be 'to not forget', and 'stay focus' should be 'stay focused'.

× I preferred make it on my phone because I can easily to edit it and write more things in my thing.

✓ I prefer to make it on my phone because I can easily edit it and write more things in it.

'Preferred' is past tense, but the context suggests present preference, so 'prefer' is correct. Also, 'make it' should be 'to make it' with the infinitive form. 'Can easily to edit' is incorrect; it should be 'can easily edit'. 'Write more things in my thing' is unclear; 'write more things in it' is clearer.