列表— Part 1 評分報告
對話
Part 1
考官
Do you make a list when you shop?
考生
Yes, I usually prepare checklist before shopping. It is very convenient since I may forgot in terms if I don't write them down. And this way I can save time and avoid buying unnecessary things.
考官
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
考生
No, I never prepare, at least for job. Because it takes up. Lots of time. And I try to remember things on my own.
考官
Why don't some people like making lists?
考生
I think that many people don't like preparing lists. ASMR. It's a takes much time as I mentioned before. And. Is. They try to remember. The sinks of each as I want.
考官
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
考生
Well, I would rather choose to prepare a list on my phone because I have a smart phone always with me and it is really convenient. And furthermore I have special app or for this.
評估
總分
Part 1
Do you make a list when you shop?
分數: 70.0建議: Ваш ответ понятен, но содержит грамматические ошибки и некоторые фразы звучат неестественно. Рекомендуется использовать более точные выражения и связки для улучшения плавности речи.
範例: Yes, I usually prepare a checklist before shopping because it helps me remember everything. This way, I can save time and avoid buying unnecessary items.
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
分數: 60.0建議: Ответ слишком короткий и содержит грамматические ошибки. Следует строить предложения более связно и использовать связующие слова для логичности.
範例: No, I don't usually make lists for work because it takes a lot of time. Instead, I try to remember tasks on my own.
Why don't some people like making lists?
分數: 40.0建議: Ответ содержит много ошибок и непонятных фраз. Нужно улучшить грамматику, убрать лишние слова и сделать ответ более связным и понятным.
範例: I think many people don't like making lists because it takes too much time. They prefer to remember things by themselves.
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
分數: 75.0建議: Ответ хороший, но можно улучшить связность и убрать повторения. Также стоит использовать более точные выражения.
範例: I prefer to make lists on my phone because I always have it with me, and it's very convenient. Moreover, I use a special app for this purpose.
文法
× Yes, I usually prepare checklist before shopping.
✓ Yes, I usually prepare a checklist before shopping.
The noun 'checklist' is countable and singular here, so it requires the indefinite article 'a' before it to be grammatically correct.
× It is very convenient since I may forgot in terms if I don't write them down.
✓ It is very convenient since I may forget items if I don't write them down.
The verb 'forgot' is the past tense, but 'may' requires the base form 'forget'. Also, 'in terms' is incorrect here; 'items' is the appropriate word.
× No, I never prepare, at least for job.
✓ No, I never prepare, at least for my job.
The noun 'job' needs a possessive determiner 'my' to specify whose job is being referred to.
× Because it takes up. Lots of time.
✓ Because it takes up a lot of time.
The phrase 'takes up' should be followed by 'a lot of time' as a single phrase; splitting into two sentences is incorrect.
× ASMR. It's a takes much time as I mentioned before.
✓ It's a task that takes much time as I mentioned before.
The sentence is fragmented and contains an unclear word 'ASMR'. Correcting to a complete sentence with proper subject and verb improves clarity.
× And. Is. They try to remember. The sinks of each as I want.
✓ And they try to remember the things as I want.
The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. Correcting to a coherent sentence with proper structure is necessary.
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