列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is generally clear and relevant, but there are some grammatical errors and awkward phrasing, such as "at this role" which should be "at this point" or "during shopping". Also, try to use linking words like "because" or "so" to connect ideas more smoothly. Keep your sentences concise and avoid redundancy.

範例: Yes, I usually make a list of the items I need before I go shopping because it helps me stay organized and saves time. For example, I group items into categories like vegetables, fruits, and household goods so I don't forget anything important.

建議: Your answer addresses the question but contains grammatical mistakes such as "I have manage" instead of "I have managed" and "complete everything thought suddenly" which is unclear. Also, avoid starting sentences with conjunctions like "Which". Use linking words like "so" or "therefore" to connect ideas logically.

範例: Yes, I usually make a list for my work because it helps me stay organized and avoid forgetting important tasks. Therefore, I have managed my time better and completed everything on time, which gives me extra time to focus on more important activities.

建議: Your answer is relevant but incomplete and contains unclear phrases like "adds extra fault" which should be "adds extra effort" or "adds extra burden". Also, the last sentence is incomplete. Try to complete your thoughts and use linking words like "because" or "for example" properly.

範例: Some people don't like making lists because they believe they can easily remember everything they need to buy. They feel that writing lists is unnecessary and adds extra effort to their daily routine. For example, some find it quicker to rely on their memory rather than writing things down.

建議: Your answer is mostly clear but contains confusing and contradictory sentences like "Speech is very convenient" and "Not ever using my phone helps me stay organized." Make sure your sentences are logical and coherent. Use linking words like "because" and avoid contradictory statements.

範例: I prefer to make a list on my phone because it is always with me, so I don't have to worry about losing it. For example, I can quickly add or delete items using apps like Notes or Reminders, which is very convenient.

× I like to group them into categories such as vegetables, fruit, some household goods, which helps me stay well organized and saves time at this role.

✓ I like to group them into categories such as vegetables, fruit, and some household goods, which helps me stay well organized and saves time on this role.

The preposition 'at' is incorrectly used with 'this role'; the correct preposition is 'on' to indicate the context or task where time is saved.

× By doing this I have manage my time better and complete everything thought suddenly.

✓ By doing this I have managed my time better and completed everything thoughtfully.

The verbs 'manage' and 'complete' should be in the past participle form 'managed' and 'completed' to correctly follow the present perfect tense 'have'. Also, 'thought suddenly' is incorrect; 'thoughtfully' is the correct adverb form.

× Which also gives me extra time to focus on more important activities.

✓ This also gives me extra time to focus on more important activities.

Starting a sentence with 'Which' creates a sentence fragment. It should be connected to the previous sentence or rephrased to form a complete sentence.

× They feel that writing lists is unnecessary and just adds extra fault to their daily routine.

✓ They feel that writing lists is unnecessary and just adds extra fault in their daily routine.

The preposition 'to' is incorrectly used; 'in' is more appropriate to indicate something added within a routine.

× For example, some find it quicker to rely on their memory rather than.

✓ For example, some find it quicker to rely on their memory rather than making lists.

The sentence ends abruptly and is incomplete. It needs an object after 'rather than' to complete the comparison.

× Speech is very convenient.

✓ This is very convenient.

'Speech' is incorrect in this context; likely a typo or wrong word choice. 'This' correctly refers to the previous statement about using apps.

× Not ever using my phone helps me stay organized.

✓ Using my phone regularly helps me stay organized.

The phrase 'Not ever using my phone' contradicts the intended meaning. The sentence structure is incorrect and needs to be rephrased to convey the correct idea.