列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Apni answer e kichu grammar mistake ache, ar kichu kotha bar bar bola hoyeche. Apni chesta korun sentence gulo ke shothik bhabe structure korte, ar proyojon chara repetition komate. Apnar uttor ke aro natural korte, ekta clear topic sentence diye suru korun, tarpor kichu specific karon den. Example: "Yes, I always make a shopping list because I tend to forget what I need. This helps me avoid buying unnecessary items and saves time."

範例: Yes, I always make a shopping list because I tend to forget what I need. This helps me avoid buying unnecessary items and saves time.

建議: Apnar uttor e kichu grammar ar sentence structure er problem ache, ar kichu kotha onek bar bola hoyeche. Apni chesta korun proshner shathe shothik bhabe answer dite, ar sentence gulo ke shothik bhabe organize korte. Linking words use korun jate uttor ta logical hoy. Example: "Yes, I make a to-do list every day at work. It helps me prioritize my tasks and stay organized throughout the day."

範例: Yes, I make a to-do list every day at work. It helps me prioritize my tasks and stay organized throughout the day.

建議: Apnar uttor e kichu confusion ache ar grammar thik nai. Apni chesta korun proshner shathe shothik bhabe answer dite, ar clear opinion dite. Linking words use korun jate uttor ta bhalo hoy. Example: "Some people don't like making lists because they find it restrictive or time-consuming. However, I believe lists help improve organization."

範例: Some people don't like making lists because they find it restrictive or time-consuming. However, I believe lists help improve organization.

建議: Apnar uttor e kichu grammar ar sentence structure er problem ache. Apni chesta korun uttor ke shothik bhabe organize korte, ar proshner shathe shothik bhabe answer dite. Specific karon den ar linking words use korun. Example: "I prefer making lists on my phone because I use it frequently throughout the day, which makes it convenient to check and update my list anytime."

範例: I prefer making lists on my phone because I use it frequently throughout the day, which makes it convenient to check and update my list anytime.

× Yes, I make a list when I go to the shop because I forgets.

✓ Yes, I make a list when I go to the shop because I forget.

The verb 'forget' should not have an 's' ending after 'I' because 'I' is first person singular and the base form of the verb is used. Adding 's' is only for third person singular subjects like 'he', 'she', or 'it'.

× So what I need to buy, what I don't need to buy.

✓ So I remember what I need to buy and what I don't need to buy.

The original sentence is a fragment and lacks a main verb, making it incomplete. Adding 'I remember' completes the sentence and clarifies the meaning.

× That's why we make a list before I go to the shop.

✓ That's why I make a list before I go to the shop.

The subject changes from 'we' to 'I' in the same sentence, which is inconsistent. Since the speaker is talking about their own action, 'I' should be used consistently.

× Yes, it worked.

✓ Yes, it works.

The question is about a habitual action, so present tense 'works' is appropriate instead of past tense 'worked'.

× When I go to the office, I make a list what I need to do today, what I don't need to today, what I about to today.

✓ When I go to the office, I make a list of what I need to do today, what I don't need to do today, and what I am about to do today.

The sentence is missing the preposition 'of' after 'make a list' and the verb 'do' after 'need to'. Also, 'what I about to today' is incomplete and should be 'what I am about to do today'.

× That's why I make a list and I, I work with my list that I have I I will call that.

✓ That's why I make a list and work with it. I call that my method.

The original sentence is repetitive and unclear. Simplifying and clarifying the sentence improves understanding.

× Will depend on everyone that some people do not like to make a list.

✓ It depends on everyone; some people do not like to make a list.

'Will depend' is incorrect here because the sentence is stating a general fact, so present tense 'depends' is appropriate. Also, 'It depends' is the correct subject-verb structure.

× If we make a list, we are we can be pretty organized, that's why we everyone needs to make a list.

✓ If we make a list, we can be pretty organized. That's why everyone needs to make a list.

The original sentence has redundant and confusing phrasing ('we are we can'). Separating into two clear sentences improves clarity.

× But some people do not like to make a list is their own opinion.

✓ But some people do not like to make a list; that is their own opinion.

The sentence lacks a proper subject for the second clause. Using 'that' as a pronoun to refer to the previous idea is correct.

× Will I make a list on? My phone because every day we used our mobile phone in almost 7 to 8 hours.

✓ I make a list on my phone because every day we use our mobile phones for almost 7 to 8 hours.

'Will I make' is incorrect here; the speaker is stating a habitual action, so simple present 'I make' is correct. Also, 'used' should be 'use' to match present tense. The preposition 'for' is needed before the duration.

× We use the mobile phone many times that's why we I make my list on my phone.

✓ We use mobile phones many times; that's why I make my list on my phone.

'The mobile phone' is too specific; 'mobile phones' is more general and appropriate here. Also, 'we I make' is incorrect; it should be 'I make' to match the subject.