列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Apni answer e kichu spelling o grammar error ache, jar fole answer ta natural lage na. Apnake chesta korte hobe sohoje o shothik bhabe kotha bolte, ar answer ta 3-4 sentence er moddhe shesh korte hobe. Apni jodi kichu linking word use koren, tahole answer ta aro logical hobe.

範例: Yes, I always make a list when I go shopping because it helps me remember what I need to buy. For example, when I go to the market, having a list makes me confident to buy everything without forgetting anything. Therefore, I prefer to prepare a list before shopping.

建議: Apnar uttor e onek confusion ache, ar sentence gulo clear na. Apnake chesta korte hobe proshner uttor sohoje o spostho bhabe dite. Linking word use kore uttor ke logical korte hobe. Apni kichu specific example dite paren jate uttor bhalo lage.

範例: Yes, I make a list for my work because it helps me organize my tasks. For instance, when I go to the office, I check my list to complete important work first. This method helps me finish my work efficiently.

建議: Apnar uttor e onek bhul ache, ar proshner uttor spostho na. Apnake chesta korte hobe proshner shathe shothik uttor dite, ar sentence gulo sohoje o shothik bhabe gorte hobe. Apni kichu karon o example dite paren jate uttor bhalo hoy.

範例: Some people don't like making lists because they find it time-consuming or forget to carry a pen and paper. Also, nowadays many prefer using their phones instead of paper lists, so some avoid making lists altogether.

建議: Apnar uttor e kichu obostha clear na, ar sentence gulo onek boro o confused. Apnake chesta korte hobe proshner uttor sohoje o spostho bhabe dite, ar linking word use korte hobe. Apni nijer pochondo o karon spostho bhabe bolte paren.

範例: I prefer to make a list on my phone because it is convenient and I always have my phone with me. Although some people like paper lists, I find digital lists easier to edit and carry around.

× Yeah, I make a list when I go to shoby cause doing at least makes be easier to buy something.

✓ Yeah, I make a list when I go to the shop because doing so at least makes it easier to buy something.

The phrase 'doing at least makes be easier' is incorrect. The correct form is 'doing so at least makes it easier'. 'Doing so' refers to the action of making a list, and 'makes it easier' correctly uses the verb and object. Also, 'shoby' is corrected to 'shop'.

× Even if I go outside to buy something in market, then if the list is mine then I decided to make the purchase without any hesitation.

✓ Even if I go outside to buy something in the market, if the list is mine, then I decide to make the purchase without any hesitation.

The noun 'market' requires the definite article 'the' when referring to a specific place. Also, 'decided' should be 'decide' to maintain present tense consistency. The sentence structure is improved by removing redundant 'then'.

× Like if I go to my office then there is no people who can't even join.

✓ For example, if I go to my office, there are no people who can't even join.

The phrase 'Like if' is informal and incorrect; 'For example, if' is more appropriate. 'There is no people' is incorrect because 'people' is plural; it should be 'there are no people'. The sentence is restructured for clarity.

× I think that people don't like to make in English because of the uh there also need a pen or paper.

✓ I think that people don't like to make lists in English because they also need a pen or paper.

The phrase 'make in English' is incomplete; it should be 'make lists in English'. The sentence is corrected to clarify the meaning and proper preposition use.

× So I take people don't like to use this sub kinds of facts becauses in now more an era people have usually used their food.

✓ So I think people don't like to use these kinds of things because nowadays people usually use their phones.

'I take' is incorrect; 'I think' is appropriate. 'Sub kinds of facts' is unclear and corrected to 'these kinds of things'. 'Becauses' is corrected to 'because'. 'In now more an era' is corrected to 'nowadays'. 'Food' is incorrect in context; 'phones' is likely intended.

× So if the Lourdes is valuable then there is no rematch.

✓ So if the list is valuable, then there is no need to change it.

'Lourdes' is likely a mishearing or typo for 'list'. 'Rematch' is incorrect in this context; 'need to change it' or 'rematch' replaced with appropriate phrase. The sentence is corrected for meaning and article use.

× But now I will talk with this.

✓ But now I will talk about this.

The preposition 'with' is incorrect here; 'talk about' is the correct phrase to indicate discussing a topic.

× In today's world, there is an invention which is very useful for a person like mobile phone, TV, electric subtypes of, etc.

✓ In today's world, there are inventions that are very useful for a person, like mobile phones, TVs, electric devices, etc.

The sentence incorrectly uses 'an invention' when referring to multiple items; plural 'inventions' is correct. 'Subtypes of' is unclear and replaced with 'devices'. The sentence is restructured for clarity.

× So when I use a mobile phone, that time I decided to use make a list on my phone.

✓ So when I use a mobile phone, I decide to make a list on my phone.

'That time I decided to use make a list' is incorrect and redundant. The sentence is corrected to maintain present tense and proper verb usage. The definite article use is appropriate here.