列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答不够自然，语法和表达存在错误，建议简化句子结构，直接回答问题，并使用正确的代词和时态。

範例: Yes, I always make a shopping list before I go to the store to help me remember what to buy.

建議: 回答不够连贯，表达不清晰，建议使用完整句子，明确说明制作清单的频率和效果，并避免重复。

範例: Yes, I sometimes make a list for my work when I have many tasks. It helps me organize my work better.

建議: 表达不准确且有语法错误，建议用更清晰的句子说明原因，并使用合适的词汇。

範例: Some people don't like making lists because they find it inconvenient and time-consuming when they have a lot of work.

建議: 回答不完整且语法错误较多，建议完整表达偏好并说明原因，避免使用错误的词汇。

範例: I prefer to make lists on my phone because it is more convenient and I can easily edit them anytime.

× Yes, why every time so I go to the shop shopping, I will make her list.

✓ Yes, every time I go shopping, I will make my list.

句中使用了错误的代词“her”，应使用“my”表示“我的”。此外，句子结构混乱，需调整顺序使其通顺。

× Yes. But not frequently, only one. I have a lot of work. I will make a list. Most of the time they are actually work.

✓ Yes, but not frequently, only once. I have a lot of work. I will make a list. Most of the time, it is actually work.

“only one”应改为“only once”表示次数；“they are actually work”中“they”指代不明，应改为“it”指代“work”，因为work是不可数名词。

× They think making this when they have they have a huge work to do. Is very UN convenience and timeless.

✓ They think making lists when they have a huge amount of work to do is very inconvenient and time-consuming.

“a huge work”应改为“a huge amount of work”表示大量工作；“UN convenience”应为“inconvenient”；“timeless”用错，应为“time-consuming”表示耗时。

× I prefer to make her lease on my phone 'cause. Or pick up a form, I will remember what job I want to do and.

✓ I prefer to make my list on my phone because when I pick up a form, I will remember what job I want to do.

“her lease”应为“my list”，代词错误；句子不完整，需补充完整表达；“'cause”应写为“because”更正式。