列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains repetitions and incomplete thoughts. Try to give a clear, concise response directly addressing the question, avoid redundancy, and provide specific reasons or examples. Use linking words to connect your ideas logically.

範例: Yes, I always make a list when I shop because it helps me remember everything I need. Without a list, I often forget important items. For example, last week I forgot to buy milk because I didn't write it down.

建議: Your answer is somewhat repetitive and incomplete. Try to structure your response with a clear topic sentence, followed by specific supporting details. Use linking words like 'however' or 'sometimes' to improve coherence.

範例: Usually, I don't make a list for my work because I focus on one major task each morning, which I can remember easily. However, when I have two or more important tasks, I create a list to stay organized. This method works well for me because it helps me manage my time efficiently.

建議: Your answer is unclear and contains incomplete sentences. Try to express your ideas clearly and avoid vague phrases. Provide specific reasons and use linking words to connect your points logically.

範例: Some people dislike making lists because they find it inconvenient to carry them around. Instead, they prefer to rely on their memory. For example, many people feel that carrying a paper list is cumbersome, so they avoid making one.

建議: Your answer is generally clear but has some repetition and incomplete thoughts. Try to avoid repeating words and complete your sentences fully. Use linking words to explain your reasons clearly.

範例: I prefer to make lists on paper because writing things down helps me remember better. Also, using my phone can be distracting since I might get sidetracked by social media. Therefore, paper lists are more efficient for me.

× Yes, I do make list when I shop because it is like an external external brain for me to remember things.

✓ Yes, I do make a list when I shop because it is like an external brain for me to remember things.

The noun 'list' is countable and singular here, so it requires the indefinite article 'a'. Also, the word 'external' was repeated twice, which is redundant and should be corrected.

× Even if I don't create the list then I would be able to forget things easily.

✓ Even if I don't create a list, then I would be able to forget things easily.

The phrase 'the list' implies a specific list already known, but here it refers to any list, so 'a list' is appropriate. Also, a comma is needed after the introductory clause for clarity.

× An animal. Easiest person to Remember Remember the things.

✓ I am like an animal, the easiest person to remember things.

The original sentences are fragments and unclear. Combining them into a complete sentence improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× Usually I don't make list for my work because in my morning I just I just have to complete 1 task which is a huge task and I remember it easily.

✓ Usually I don't make a list for my work because in the morning I just have to complete one task, which is a huge task, and I remember it easily.

'List' is a countable noun and requires the article 'a'. 'In my morning' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'in the morning'. Also, numbers under ten are generally written in words in formal writing.

× But occasionally when I have true or more things to do and they are important for the day, I do create list and yet it does work efficiently because I know how to how to do my work and.

✓ But occasionally when I have two or more things to do and they are important for the day, I do create a list and it works efficiently because I know how to do my work.

'True' is a typo and should be 'two'. 'List' needs the article 'a'. The phrase 'yet it does work efficiently' is awkward; 'it works efficiently' is better. The sentence was incomplete and has been corrected for clarity.

× People nowadays don't like to make lists because it is, you know, they.

✓ People nowadays don't like to make lists because, you know, they don't.

The original sentence ends abruptly and uses pronouns incorrectly. Completing the sentence with 'they don't' clarifies the meaning.

× You hate to carry the smallest in their pockets and instead of that day just remember the things nowadays, just like me like they are lazy to carry the list, but that's that's the main.

✓ They hate to carry the smallest things in their pockets and instead just remember things nowadays, just like me; they are lazy to carry the list, but that's the main disadvantage.

Pronouns were mixed and unclear. 'You' was incorrectly used instead of 'they'. 'Smallest' should be 'smallest things' or 'small items'. The sentence was fragmented and unclear, so it was restructured for clarity.

× I prefer to make list on my paper because writing writing the things which are important for me in my list on paper is more efficient than carrying information in my phone because.

✓ I prefer to make a list on paper because writing the things that are important to me in my list on paper is more efficient than carrying information on my phone.

'List' is a countable noun and requires the article 'a'. The phrase 'on my paper' is better as 'on paper'. Repetition of 'writing' was removed. 'In my phone' should be 'on my phone'.

× If we open up the lists in the phone, then we might just get distracted and use social media, but I would like to say that.

✓ If we open up the lists on the phone, then we might just get distracted and use social media, but I would like to say that.

The correct preposition for devices like phones is 'on' rather than 'in'. The sentence ends abruptly but was left as is to maintain the original meaning.