列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is unclear and lacks coherence. Try to form complete sentences and explain why you make a list when shopping. Use linking words to connect your ideas logically.

範例: Yes, I always make a list when I go shopping because it helps me remember the important items I need to buy and saves time.

建議: Your answer is fragmented and some words are unclear. Try to give a clear topic sentence and explain how making a list helps you work efficiently, using linking words.

範例: Yes, I always make a list for my work because it helps me complete tasks step by step, which makes me work faster and saves time.

建議: Your answer is repetitive and lacks detail. Avoid making negative assumptions without explanation. Try to give possible reasons with supporting details.

範例: Some people may not like making lists because they find it time-consuming or prefer to remember things mentally.

建議: Your answer is unclear and incomplete. Use full sentences and explain clearly why you prefer using your phone, including benefits with linking words.

範例: I prefer making lists on my phone because it is easy to use and helps me save time since I don't have to remember everything.

× Yes, I make list.

✓ Yes, I make a list.

The noun 'list' is countable and singular here, so it requires the indefinite article 'a'. Without it, the sentence is grammatically incorrect.

× When I. Cool. To the soft for sopping.

✓ When I go to the shop for shopping.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. It needs to be restructured into a complete sentence with proper verbs and prepositions to convey the intended meaning.

× I list.

✓ I make a list.

The phrase 'I list' is incomplete and incorrect. The verb 'make' is needed to express the action, and 'a list' is the correct object form.

× The name of important. Necessary.

✓ I write the names of important and necessary items.

The original sentence lacks clarity and proper structure. 'Important' and 'necessary' are adjectives that need to modify a noun, and the sentence should clearly state what is being listed.

× When I work on some works.

✓ When I work on some tasks.

The word 'works' is generally uncountable or refers to creations; 'tasks' is more appropriate for work assignments and is countable.

× Big God.

✓ It is very helpful.

'Big God' is nonsensical in this context. The sentence likely intends to express that making a list is very helpful, so it needs to be rewritten accordingly.

× When I work. Step by step.

✓ When I work step by step,

The original is fragmented. Combining the phrases into a single clause improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× It helped me to save time.

✓ It helps me to save time.

The tense should be present to match the habitual action. Also, 'helped' is past tense, but the context suggests a general truth.

× They don't like. 2. Make list.

✓ They don't like to make lists.

The verb 'make' should be in the infinitive form 'to make' after 'like', and 'list' should be plural 'lists' to indicate the general activity.

× I think they are lazy.

✓ I think they are lazy.

This sentence is correct; no correction needed.

× I prefer making list on my phone because.

✓ I prefer making lists on my phone because

'List' should be plural 'lists' to indicate the general activity of making multiple lists.

× It had to remember.

✓ I don't have to remember them.

The original sentence is unclear and grammatically incorrect. The intended meaning is likely that the phone helps by storing the list so the user doesn't have to remember it.

× An easy.

✓ It's easy.

'An easy' is incomplete; 'easy' is an adjective and needs a subject and verb to form a correct sentence.

× Save the time.

✓ It saves time.

The phrase 'save the time' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'save time' without 'the', and it needs a subject and verb.