列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 你的回答表达了基本意思，但语法错误较多，如"that ensure"应为"to ensure"，且句子结构不够自然。建议注意动词形式和句子连贯性，避免重复表达。

範例: Yes, I always make a list before shopping to ensure I don't forget anything important. Otherwise, I might buy things I don't need.

建議: 回答中存在语法错误，如"I'm make a list"不正确，且句子断裂，缺少连贯的连接词。建议练习正确的时态和句子连接，使表达更流畅。

範例: Yes, I make a list for my work. I create a schedule and prioritize important and urgent tasks to manage my time effectively.

建議: 回答较简短且表达不够清晰，"make this"应为"make lists"。建议扩展理由，使用更准确的词汇和句子结构。

範例: I think some people dislike making lists because they prefer the freedom to decide what to do spontaneously without restrictions.

建議: 回答中有多处语法和用词错误，如"then purple"应为"than paper"，"offers to end convenience"应为"offers great convenience"，且重复词汇。建议加强词汇准确性和句子结构练习。

範例: I prefer to make lists on my phone rather than on paper because it offers great convenience and I can carry it anywhere at any time.

× If I don't make a list, I probably purchased something wrong that I don't need.

✓ If I don't make a list, I probably purchase something wrong that I don't need.

这里的句子是一个条件句，主句用的是一般现在时态（probably purchase），而原句用了过去时态（purchased），时态不一致。应使用一般现在时态表示习惯性动作。

× When I work, I'm make a list.

✓ When I work, I make a list.

这里的句子中“I'm make”是不正确的，现在进行时态结构是“am/is/are + 动词ing”，但“make”后面没有加ing，且此处表达习惯动作应使用一般现在时。应改为“I make a list”。

× And rank what I need to do important and urgent tasks.

✓ And rank the important and urgent tasks I need to do.

原句中“rank what I need to do important and urgent tasks”结构混乱，形容词“important”和“urgent”应修饰“tasks”，且需要加定冠词“the”，调整语序使句子通顺。

× I guess those who don't like to make this should prefer the freedom to choose what to do.

✓ I guess those who don't like to make lists should prefer the freedom to choose what to do.

原句中“make this”中的“this”指代不明，应使用复数名词“lists”来明确指代“making lists”。

× I prefer to make list on my phone then purple because the mobile phone offers to end convenience.

✓ I prefer to make lists on my phone rather than paper because the mobile phone offers more convenience.

原句中“make list”应为复数“make lists”，比较结构应为“rather than”而非“then”，且“purple”应为“paper”，最后“offers to end convenience”表达错误，应为“offers more convenience”。

× They can be carried carried at any time.

✓ They can be carried at any time.

句子中“carried”重复出现，应删除多余的一个“carried”。