列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is generally clear but contains some grammatical errors and awkward phrasing, such as "I consider myself, I am very organized person" and "helps me remember everything I need to end." Try to use simpler, more natural sentences and correct grammar. Also, avoid redundancy like "thanks my thanks to my list."

範例: Yes, I consider myself a very organized person, so I always make a list when I go shopping. It helps me remember everything I need and prevents me from buying unnecessary items. For example, last week, thanks to my list, I didn't forget to buy the ingredients for dinner.

建議: Your answer is unclear and contains many grammatical mistakes, such as "I consider I'm quite an planner person" and "I always try to memory things what I need." Please focus on clear sentence structure and correct word usage. Also, complete your thoughts fully to make your answer understandable.

範例: Yes, I consider myself a planner. I always try to remember what I need to do, but at work, I make a list to ensure I don't forget any important tasks.

建議: Your answer is very unclear and difficult to understand. Try to organize your ideas logically and use complete sentences. Explain reasons clearly and avoid fragmented phrases. Practice linking your ideas with appropriate connectors.

範例: I think some people don't like making lists because they feel it takes too much time or they prefer to remember things naturally. Also, sometimes making a list is not convenient if they are in a hurry.

建議: Your answer is incomplete and contains errors like "make a. At least on my phone" and "more convenient than pepper." Please complete your sentences and use correct vocabulary. Also, explain your preference clearly with reasons.

範例: I prefer to make a list on my phone because it is more convenient than paper. I always carry my phone, so I won't forget my list.

× Yes, definitely I consider myself, I am very organized person, so I always make a list when I go shopping.

✓ Yes, definitely I consider myself a very organized person, so I always make a list when I go shopping.

The sentence is missing the article 'a' before 'very organized person' and the pronoun usage is awkward. Adding 'a' clarifies the noun phrase and improves sentence structure.

× It helps me remember everything I need to end, prevents me from buying unnecessary items.

✓ It helps me remember everything I need to buy, and prevents me from buying unnecessary items.

The phrase 'need to end' is incorrect; it should be 'need to buy' to express the intended meaning. Also, adding 'and' improves sentence flow.

× For example, last week thanks my thanks to my list, I didn't forget to buy ingredients for dinner.

✓ For example, last week thanks to my list, I didn't forget to buy ingredients for dinner.

The phrase 'thanks my thanks to my list' is redundant and incorrect. The correct phrase is 'thanks to my list' to indicate cause or reason.

× Yes, I consider I'm quite an planner person.

✓ Yes, I consider myself quite a planner person.

The phrase 'I consider I'm' is incorrect; it should be 'I consider myself' to correctly use the reflexive pronoun. Also, 'an planner' should be 'a planner' because 'planner' starts with a consonant sound.

× I always try to memory things what I need an also at work I make a list to make sure my ski.

✓ I always try to remember the things I need, and also at work I make a list to make sure my skills are organized.

'Try to memory' is incorrect; the correct verb is 'try to remember'. The phrase 'what I need' should be 'the things I need' for clarity. The sentence is incomplete and unclear; adding 'skills are organized' clarifies the meaning.

× I guess people just think they will. Do they hear plan by hurt? But sometimes it's not convenient for them. Come because. Making list more. Rim.

✓ I guess people just think they will be hurt by planning, but sometimes it's not convenient for them.

The original sentences are fragmented and unclear. Combining them into a coherent sentence improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× I prefer to make a. At least on my phone, because it's more convenient than pepper.

✓ I prefer to make a list at least on my phone, because it's more convenient than paper.

The phrase 'make a.' is incomplete and 'pepper' is a typo for 'paper'. Correcting these improves sentence meaning and grammar.

× I also I can forget about paper. I always carry my phone.

✓ Also, I don't have to worry about paper because I always carry my phone.

The original sentence is awkward and unclear. Rephrasing it improves clarity and grammatical correctness.